Prancer

This is about how others can maintain a faithful relationship and I'm kind wondering where the hell and when is someone gonna be faithful with me in a relationship

Hear the voices of angels 

Such a heart on for something new 

So where is it now 

Hold my hand

I can cause your soul my pain 

But that's nothing shockingly 

So where are you now 

Hold my wrists 

Can find your answers and 

They're scarred within my skin 

You're just not good enough 

It's only best for you 

Stolen mental waves 

What the hell 

Feel 

Is there something wrong with me 

I like taste of salt on my cuts 

So where is it now 

Oh, f**k me 

Can find your answers and 

They're scarred within my skin 

You're just not good enough 

It's only best for you 

Stolen mental waves 

What the hell 

Feel 

You are the only one to see 

The fights that I've dealt in me 

I can see you're so upset 

Are you even real at all

Reviews

[Nightfeather]

This poem is such a connected reflection of the personal lives of many humans. Faithfulness is easy to lose but so hard to gain. The message of this poem can awaken the minds of many, for many are still trapped in ignorance and find faithfulness not that important but they forget something. Faithfulness is one of the pillars that holds humanity in the air, leaving it not to fall and crumble but to shine.

Good job :D