Methaphor

Break up poem

F*****g hide and sort of try

Perhaps it doesn't fly

I don't kill it's just enough

To shove it in my face

It's easy to corrode your right

And you have nothing to go on

Failing me it's pleasing me

It's a f*****g way of life

Metaphor switch the rest

You're here to stay alone

It's easy to corrode you right

And you have nothing to go on

A threat from the times

And you will prepared

Something food for thought

Idiocy to rise come to fault the light

Scream until you die 

Metaphors goodbye 

Don't begin to start the time

Tell me to go f**k myself

It may solve the critical

Reviews

[John Cardwell]

Interesting. A no-rhyme, incoherent, anger-filled rant of a lyric. Exactly what one would expect, lyrically, from someone who has just broken up with someone they loved. It works for me. Great job.

(p.s. It would be fun to see what style of music you will want to back this with.