Breaking through

a break through inside my head

We live everyday,
missing the important details.
We don't notice them...
Until they're nearly gone
Until we start thinking straight
Until we lose them...
Until we lose sight of...
Who we were
Who we are
Who we can be
Who we want to be
...
Starting now everyday
...we begin...
to change
What we can
What we can't

There are no second chances,
but there are chances
...first chances...
Making up for
Mistakes
Things we miss to see
Lies we said or did
People we left behind
Loved ones we hurt
Who we used to be

Now you won't forget.

Author's Note

haven't wrote for so long :) please review! I'd appreciate it highly!!!

Reviews

[Anonymous]

Its easy to, wrapped in the big things, forget the small details and hurt somebody you love with them. It is quite the thing to know that there are likely many pains you inflict on others without even noticing them, because you do not look well enough at the details.

[bookreader]

We tend to live a life, where smaller things in life are taken for granted - life itself, being healthy, having shelter, food, clothes, feelings, people we take for granted. The step back to reflect on who we are, what we want to be, is essential. Nice write.

[The Revisionist]

Thank you for understanding deeply the aim of this poem, how we tend to forget the little things that could also be the most aspects to ourselves