I Hate You

I Hate You

A Poem by there is no more from me on this account :( sorry
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Just a poem I wrote a while ago

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I Hate You

 

I hate you so much

your a Lying bastered

All you care is yourself

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I hate yo so much

I never want to see you again

and i hate you so much

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I cant stop thinking

about you at all

but i hat you so much

© 2010 there is no more from me on this account :( sorry


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Okay....(bastered) is b*****d....I figure if you are going to name call, spell
it right..lol makes more of an impact (sorry if that sounds harsh, because it's really not meant to be!). I can understand the feelings put into this poem, because I have felt that way about certain people who have crossed my path in my lifetime. Short and filled with a bite of a snake (inuendo). Just be sure to read through it and fix small details. :) good job

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I know those feelings and thoughts very well! You sure did a great job on this one!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Been there. Done that. GREAT JOB!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Okay....(bastered) is b*****d....I figure if you are going to name call, spell
it right..lol makes more of an impact (sorry if that sounds harsh, because it's really not meant to be!). I can understand the feelings put into this poem, because I have felt that way about certain people who have crossed my path in my lifetime. Short and filled with a bite of a snake (inuendo). Just be sure to read through it and fix small details. :) good job

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Strong words and to the point. Ending is what we feel and desire when we get twisted up. I like the poem. A lot of emotion in your words.
Coyote


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 7, 2010
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there is no more from me on this account :( sorry
there is no more from me on this account :( sorry

Victoria, Melbourne, Australia



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Okay so i am really sorry but i am going to create a new account i will leave my poems on here but my new things will be posted on my new account bye (from this account) more..

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