Tonight

This poem describes the emptiness and loneliness one is going through

Tonight just like every other night

I sit on my bed waiting for you

Hoping you'd come home

From wherever you are

Tonight just like every other night

I wish you are cuddling me in your arms

Holding me close to your heart

Keeping me warm from the cold

Tonight just like every other night

I am all alone again

Tears in my eyes with an aching heart

Tonight just like every other night

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Nice piece, but, how do I explain this? Oh yes, too many people hope for a physical love, which pretty much screws up the general concept of love. What happened to having someone to talk to whenever I feel down? Someone to share all of my thoughts with? Someone to connect emotionally with? Well, that's just my opinion, too many people write about having a physical love when the real feeling of love comes from within. Great write, despite that. keep writing!

[Danielle Bixler]

i can relate with this pome i have many pomes that are some what like this one i like it a lot.

[Leslie Philibert]

Great,the kind of poetry I like,honest,simple with an universal message that says something about the universal condition and nothing about the ego of the author.Sounds a bit like a hit ( a song) from the fifties.Very good.

[Hoosier Belle]

Such an emotional read. So nicely written. ♥

[Larry Dyson]

yes Emma is right ...over and above the need for physical love is the need to be charished..thats what I hear ..will you charish Me now and make the rest of the world go away?.. nice expressive one..

[emmajoy]

Sad and sadder: your words are simple and brief but the hurt is so obvious and deep. A poem full of emotion. .. 'I wish you are cuddling me in your arms' .. too many people have felt, said, thought or written that.

[Wolfwind]

I feel your words convey well the emotions of loneliness and the want of another's warm embrace. The flow is smooth and there is enough description that one can envision the backdrop scene of the poem.

Wonderful Ink!
Aaron