Angst. Sadness. Feelings.

Lies. All of it are lies
I can't trust anyone
Life is so hard
I can't do it

The moonlights glow shines
On the broken house where I belong
It reminds me of the suffering
And the pain I feel.

I try to give up
The world comes crashing down
Its all a lie
I have so much pain

Like a bottle ready to explode
I cant keep it in
I lose myself
And am trapped in my own head

I let it all out
It feels better
I can breathe
I am free

I feel changed
Like a songbird out of a cage
The scarlet moon is high in the sky
It becomes the last thing I see as I slowly bleed out

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I agree with Tai, you do have a lot of potential as a writer. I like how you pour all of your emotions out into this poem. It makes it a lot better. I know how it feels to not be able to trust anyone. It seems like all I'm ever told is lies, lies, and more lies. For me I see this how I feel about my most recent break-up. The world without him soon fell apart and crashed. I like how you wrote this for any reader to imagine what situation you might be going through. Great job :)

Ashley Rivers-- Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Destructive Impulse]

Ok is that really all that poetry is? Writing down the first thing that comes to mind? Cause if so I could actually do this s**t. :D

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Yeah, that's what it really is! Expressing how you feel and writing down your emotions and feelings. Yep you get the point I can tell xD

[Destructive Impulse]

You serious...

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Yes, I don't lie when it comes to writing :P

[Destructive Impulse]

Damn I wrote this kinda as joke. Sorry but I mean look at the title. That's just so angsty

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Haha, well I do that sometimes too. Writing stuff for a joke :D

[Destructive Impulse]

I thought you didn't joke bout writing :P

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

That's true, haha. But like I have a poem that it is soo funny! So it was a joke :)

[Tai Ryens]

For a person who doesn't take his writing seriously, you've got a lot of potential in you as a writer, I swear.

[Destructive Impulse]

Lol I'm sorry. I made this in five minutes to try and illustrate a point. I wrote down the first thing that really came to my mind XD
It's overly angsty and pretty damn cliche imo