The Train

The Train

A Poem by Will

The train rolls down the tracks
A tear rolls down my face

I'm tied to the rails
No way to escape

I am held down by pain
Fear locks me in

The Train of life is rolling
Threatening to cut me in two

The ropes: they are snug
But not airtight

I wiggle and I struggle
The ropes begin to loosen

If I could shake my demons
Then I could break away

I look Fear in the eye
And I shake off one rope

I stare down my Pain
Another rope falls away

Agony gets the evil eye
And I am almost free

Alas, Death stares right back
I cannot break free

The Train rolls down the track
And Death stares me down

But I have befriended Death
And She has called my name

But I dare not respond
That is what she wants

I scream out "Not yet!"
And the rope falls away.

I spring to my feet
And I pick up the ropes

Now I tie them down:
Fear, Pain, Agony, and Death

They are tied to the tracks
And I look on

The Train rolls down the tracks
And rolls right over them

They are lopped in two
And I remain as one

© 2013 Will


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This was great. An awesome story of survival, from what seemed like a hopeless situation.
Nice one, Will. :3

Posted 11 Years Ago


Will

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
Andie

11 Years Ago

Anytime. :3
Survival in a metaphor. A sad but uplifting piece as the protagonist escapes by reaching inside and using their will to defeat adversity.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Will

11 Years Ago

Spot on. Thanks for reading, John.

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Added on March 14, 2013
Last Updated on March 22, 2013
Tags: Fear, pain, agony, death, trains, life, tracks, rails

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Will
Will

Brooklyn, NY



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