Got a match?

I quit smoking

But I would give anything for one more

I would sneak one when no one was looking

I would have one in full view of everyone

I would savor it slowly when I did

Just to have one more against my lips

To be able to feel the heat enter my body

To experience the taste again

I would do whatever it takes

I miss them, I need them, I want them

 

You quit kissing me

(re-read lines 2 thru 10)

Reviews

[Cory Barrett]

You tricky little devil, this this fun

[willweb]

Glad you liked this one Streamline.

[Matching Socks]

Oh boy...
When I re-read lines 2-10 on their own...

It REALLY takes on a whole new meaning and makes me think you could have a future in a whole other genre of writing...

...and I would follow you there too.

Just some food for thought.
(Unless of course you're already there. Hmmmm....)

[willweb]

Thank you Ance. I am not sure what genre you are talking about, but I would like to find out. I am happy you liked this one.

[Matching Socks]

Oh. Umm. ;-)
Chat later?


JOKING!!!!!

[Lyn Anderson]

Ha, I like your thought process here. Yeah, quitting smoking is a b***h.:)