Snow Job ~ A Winter Collaboration with Ana Sophia

Snow Job ~ A Winter Collaboration with Ana Sophia

A Poem by willweb

 

Minding my own business

Walking through the snow

I’ve got no place to get to

Nowhere I need to go

 

When suddenly a snow ball

Slams cold upon my face

I hear her laugh and run away

I slip and then give chase

 

I can't believe I did that!

But oh! I got him good!

I've got another snowball ready

I wonder if I should...

 

No time to stand and wonder

I haven't thought this through

He's chasing me, I need to hide

Under that bridge will do

 

Following her giggles

Her steps left in the snow

It seems she’s run beneath that bridge

So that’s where I will go

 

I gather up a handful

then form it in a ball

When I run through an icy patch

And on my butt I fall

 

Peeking around the corner

I see him take a fall

I know I'm rather cruel

But he looks so funny sprawled

 

Here's my chance to get him

I creep in for a sneak attack

I'm hovering above him now

Right behind his back

 

It’s then I see her shadow

Coming from the rear

Pretending I don’t notice her

She’s creeping ever near

 

I spin around to face her

Her beauty now I see

Then she slips just like I did

And lands on top of me

 

That patch of ice it got me

Imagine my surprise

When I landed right on top him

Now staring into his eyes

 

My body it feels warm now

Can't feel the cold one bit

I smile at him sweetly

And tell him "You're still IT"


Her smile overwhelms me

A wintry day as this

Still I hold the snowball tight

But might just steal a kiss


I move a little closer

Her lips I’d love to trace

Close my eyes and pull her near

Then, slam, right in the face


Haha! I'm really sorry!

But gosh you look so cute

Teasing you is so much fun

It's really quite a hoot


Please will you forgive me?

I really couldn't resist...

I promise not to do it again

If you give me just one kiss

 

Leaning in to kiss her

And then she sees my hand

The snowball I am holding

Jumps up and runs again

 

I just lie there freezing

Cannot believe all this

Perhaps in our next poem

I’ll finally get that kiss

 

© 2015 willweb


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As I have read quite a few collaborations that you two have managed I have come to the conclusion that the chemistry or simbiotic participation or something else even , the fact is that there is listening to one another and there is clear letting go of each other, As if swinging from side to side as the writings all end up been melodious and inviting. They're pleasant and romantic , there is cute and naive there is togetherness and a bit of cheecky even. It is certainly refreshing. What to me is most appealing in that you two separately have very distinct styles of writings yet when you come together it is a new style that gets created. I really look forward for this invtiation.

Thankyou

Posted 4 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Rene Salinas

4 Years Ago

Ha! good things happen to those who wait WIlly.
Matching Socks

4 Years Ago

I could have sworn I responded to this already...
Thank you Rene, you're always sweet and kind.. read more
MomzillaNC

4 Years Ago

Be sure to go to the contest and vote for your favorite: http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Make-Us.. read more



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Oh, Will... If only you knew how much I miss you.. Kudos, my friend :(

Posted 4 Years Ago


I loved the humor, the playfulness and romance in this wonderful collaboration!

Posted 4 Years Ago


willweb

4 Years Ago

Thank you Island Woman fo you kind words. I am happy you enjoyed our poem.
Very good poem with a bit of humor in it. Throwing snowballs, it's a long time ago but I loved to do it. Very good collaboration, Ana and Will. :) Rudi

Posted 4 Years Ago


willweb

4 Years Ago

Thanks so very much Rudi.
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dan
Ana and Will, The two of you mesh very well and each verse written feeds off of the collaborator's verse wonderfully. This piece is so playful and joyous that the two of you seem as if you could actually be a couple. That's a chemistry the two of you have and it works very well. I enjoy your 'adventures' and would happily read more. Thank you for sending the read request, I love it! take care...dan

Posted 4 Years Ago


willweb

4 Years Ago

Thanks so very much Dan. There are a few more scattered amidst my list of poems, if you ever feel li.. read more
Wow, this is brilliant!
I love this kind of poems :)
So much beauty and love around them, I haven't seen a good poem about love in a long time
Great work both fo you!

Posted 4 Years Ago


willweb

4 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Lizardo
Haha! This was so adorable:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


willweb

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much Cool Girl. Happy this one made you smile.
Cool Girl

4 Years Ago

You're welcome, my friend! It was a pleasure to read! :)
This is a very beautiful poem indeed!
I loved the imagery and that playfull attitude. Nicely done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


willweb

4 Years Ago

Thanks Ana B. This is one of the other collabs Ana and I have written. Happy you stopped by.
Awe, this is a fantastic collaboration. Very impressive! I love the flirty, playful, and sexy essence! The wintry images are so vivid, and rhythmically entwined to perfection! Bravo to you both!! Respectfully, blue angel

Posted 4 Years Ago


blue angel

4 Years Ago

You are welcome, I love commenting on quality work, and giving praise when praise is deserved! :)
willweb

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Blue Angel for you kind words.
blue angel

4 Years Ago

:) you are very welcome.
Fun, laughter and utter friendships can form playing in the snow. I remember the trips we made to the mountains of Lebanon and how we enjoyed the snow so much. A great collaboration between two wonderful writers that brings up memories...:)............

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:).......
willweb

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much Sami. Happy you found our poem and enjoyed it. Ana always makes me look good.
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome muchly....:)......
This is fantastic. You two did an outstanding job here. I have never seen a collaboration done so well as this one.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Matching Socks

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
willweb

4 Years Ago

Thanks so very much. I am happy you enjoyed our poem. Ana's talent and friendship makes these easy. .. read more

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