Dark

Sucking moon’s luster

Dark tentacles of an oak

Perforate the sky

 

 

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This has a chilling edge as it provokes images of oak branches in the dark of night, a scene ofetn portrayed in horror films.

[DIVYA]

Tried to bring in that effect. Glad you you appreciated. Thank you John.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

The Oaks have a long reach...the moon teases...
j.

[DIVYA]

Thanks for the beautiful word share...Appreciated so much, my friend.

[🌹]

A dark haiku now? Is there any theme in this form you cannot excel at? "Tentacles of an oak" is a wonderfully original image, I loved that. Your knowledge of the form is profound and they are enjoyable to read. Thank you, DIVYA. 🌹

[DIVYA]

Thanks once again, my dear friend Viktoria. Have a great day ....