Alone

She falls to the ground crushed

Everyone around her begins to fade

Slowly they all back away

She's pushed everyone she loves away

Now she stands behind the glass

She looks in watching everyone

Laughing, smiling, and celebrating

She hangs her head low

A cold wind blows at the back of her neck

She knew she wouldn't be missed

So why then is she so upset?

She loved and gave her entire heart

Her entire reason for being

Her very existance

All her devotion was to her clan

The only family she ever knew

She shakes her head

The bitter tears flowing

It's all the same

No matter where she goes

There is always the same ending

Cold

Hurt

Alone

Reviews

[Neon]

Yeah .. I liked the flow. Love without life and life without love's as same as heart without beat and a soul without body .. So, love and life both're crucial and to make 'em balance hurt and loneliness's must...
... But as i always say, i hate seeing angels sad so, yeah .. i do hate seeing someone as beautiful as you feel sad .. so don't be sad .. grow up and make some cool and good things from the bad things to make your future bright to live with both love and life.

Keep on!

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you for reading sweetie. I wrote this a long time ago when I was in high school and found one of my old note books. Not everything I write is current :)
I am very happy, and thank you for your encouraging words. You are very sweet, but no need to worry. Promise. xo Winter

[Antoñyo]

More in-your-face truth and pure emotion from this writer!
...the last six lines:

It's all the same
No matter where she goes
There is always the same ending
Cold
Hurt
Alone

...makes it all come together. I thoroughly enjoyed reading every passionate line.

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you so much bud!

[shallimarRose]

"A cold wind blows at the back of her neck
She knew she wouldn't be missed"

encased in a snow-globe she looks out to see
the world somehow still turns without her
and she wonders why.... and tears flow
because she misses
what she thought she did not want?

This is a powerfully emotional poem WRose..
xo Rose

[FlatLineBeauty]

thank you rose :) xoxo

[I Am Svetlana]

This poem perfectly describes my feelings right now. Life is so tough and it's not easy to constantly keep pushing on forward. Sometimes, we have to stop and take a breath. See and know what we are doing, contemplate. My family, I feel they don't appreciate me at times, though I am giving my life all I that I have. I want to prove to them that I am able to be good enough and want them to see and appreciate the effort I have for being able to put my darkest feelings aside in order for them to see me.

[FlatLineBeauty]

This is why we click so well. You just get it. I really don't talk to my family anymore. I gave up. My give a f**k button broke long ago, well then after that I was in a group. Not a gang or anything like that just I guess you could call us a clan of misfits. Close enough to family right? Well that fell apart today too -shrugs- Some days I really wish I didn't give a damn, but deep down it bugs me and I know I always will.

[I Am Svetlana]

Yeah, I completely understand how you feel and I'm so glad that we click so well. My family likes to underestimate me and what I am capable of in life, yet I still find the strength to believe in myself and fight on another day. Tonight wasn't a good night, but it's slowly becoming okay by talking to you :)

[FlatLineBeauty]

I agree bestie! You make the days and nights easier :)

[I Am Svetlana]

Thanks and same here! You are the most wonderful best friend! :) I am so glad to have you by my side through whatever.