late night rambling

late night rambling

A Poem by Wolfwind

Vision for being not withstanding

Fractal pieces falling in to discordance with the ground

Boiling liquids dancing drips, dropping unduly

Crystallizing connotations creeping

No sleep!

Desperation for dreams discordance

Seamlessness has been quacked, queried and quarreled

Camp can not be cooked, caking carrot crumbs

Crap, crazy thoughts fumbling like logs licked by flames

Forever not…not no more, go forth! Be damned!

Shackled yet still upon the crowded crust

Like unwanted zeppelin’s

Wishful thinking solves nothing

Never, Never

No good, groveling

Must groove and grapple fears

Go forth, change gears before destruction collapses thought!

Cold toes, hot toes, burning low, rising flames igniting!

Disembodied brain screaming!

Trying to run

Unable to separate from technical difficulties!

  Must find fix before complete meltdown

Discombobulation occurring 

© 2012 Wolfwind


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OMG!!! DON'T DISCOMBOBULATE ON ME!!! *runs around frantically with a stapler and some duct tape*

Well, that set aside, wonderful little poem you have here!!! Well, "little" being an overexaggerated misconception, I believe. But anyways, I quite enjoyed the disturbingly lovely (lovelyly disturbing?) imagery in this rambling of yours. It was disturbing in a surprising fluffy and lovely way. Words like "shackled", "grapple", "flames", "crap", "toes", "licked", MY GOD, IT'S GENIUS!!! Almost like an enormous sock monkey set against a backdrop of millions of burning rabid bunnies falling from the sky like meteors with some disturbingly soothing Billy Joel dubstep remix playing in the background and nine cyclopses slowly pulling you away on a sled but you can't stop LAUGHING because IT'S SO DAMN FUNNY and you must be going TOTALLY INSANE but you can't tell because you're LAUGHING TOO HARD!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wolfwind

12 Years Ago

OMG! You understand it! *Bows down at your feet and begins to chant like Elvis* =) Thank you!
Admiral Kirk

12 Years Ago

OH SCHWEET YOU CAN BE MY REPLACEMENT ELVIS!!! lol xD You're welcome!!!



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OMG!!! DON'T DISCOMBOBULATE ON ME!!! *runs around frantically with a stapler and some duct tape*

Well, that set aside, wonderful little poem you have here!!! Well, "little" being an overexaggerated misconception, I believe. But anyways, I quite enjoyed the disturbingly lovely (lovelyly disturbing?) imagery in this rambling of yours. It was disturbing in a surprising fluffy and lovely way. Words like "shackled", "grapple", "flames", "crap", "toes", "licked", MY GOD, IT'S GENIUS!!! Almost like an enormous sock monkey set against a backdrop of millions of burning rabid bunnies falling from the sky like meteors with some disturbingly soothing Billy Joel dubstep remix playing in the background and nine cyclopses slowly pulling you away on a sled but you can't stop LAUGHING because IT'S SO DAMN FUNNY and you must be going TOTALLY INSANE but you can't tell because you're LAUGHING TOO HARD!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wolfwind

12 Years Ago

OMG! You understand it! *Bows down at your feet and begins to chant like Elvis* =) Thank you!
Admiral Kirk

12 Years Ago

OH SCHWEET YOU CAN BE MY REPLACEMENT ELVIS!!! lol xD You're welcome!!!
I find this pretty surreal Aaron, very neat. And of course somewhat psychadelic!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Wolfwind
Wolfwind

Coupeville, WA



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Sometimes poet, always an artist, creator of colorful visions, dreamer, and a seeker of things not yet known. more..

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