Paw Prints

Time spins, a new page is born and essence of the sands is sunny.

The ancient sands blew

The sun winked, curling its golden glitter

Young eyes embittered with old wisdoms

They gazed and knew

Even the strong…

Those massive towers, cliffs and solid buttes aloft

Time would take them…

Remake them…

They would end…The sand would continue

Those eyes

They understood…

That the sand knew the truth

For it kept all of eternities great secrets

Holding the memories of even the oldest times

 

Ever moving, ceaseless motion

Those eyes, a Mystic under the moon

Never failing to read the wind

Treading always upon the sparkling grains

A source of cleansing, beneath bare feet

The ever changing …scape

Knew the Mystic’s shape and turn

Upon that land…, seen by those eyes

 

So too…the tides of time within the grains

Surging, tugging, rising and beating

Releasing and vanishing

 

So too…that the Mystic would see

Prints of those feet passing

 Carrying motion

 

So too…The Mystic did see

Those other prints

 Never failing to journey side by side

Even though at times

They could not bee seen

 

And so…The Mystic smiled

The sand had always kept the secrets

As had He upon the golden Earth

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"the Mystic would see

Prints of those feet passing

Carrying motion



So too…The Mystic did see

Those other prints

Never failing to journey side by side

Even though at times

They could not bee seen



And so…The Mystic smiled

The sand had always kept the secrets

As had He upon the golden Earth"
I like mysticism and this poem...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Wolfwind]

Thank you for reading! =)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Miss. McPherson]

Yet another excellent poem.
I love this poem, and I think its my favorite.
It flows very, very well :)
Great Job!

[Wolfwind]

Thank you! It does seem to be a favorite of peoples. I appreciate your comments! =)

[Miss. McPherson]

No Problem!
You've got talent!

Btw, I'm writing the newest chapter of Changing Worlds as we speak! =)

[Soul Fire]

Whoa...so beautiful. you transported me to a place of peace well penned

[Wolfwind]

I'm glad that you enjoyed the ink experience. =)

[Soul Fire]

thank you (:

[Katerina Felinova]

A great read. I love the imagery used through out the poem. I love the way you describe the sand
holding all Earth's secrets and the prints left behind by others. Very moving work.

[Wolfwind]

Thank you! I'm glad it came through with a positive energy. I appreciate you taking the time to come by and read. =)