Weaving Tapestries

Upon many of these thoughts does the

Night go round upon the wise Oak door

Ageless as it leads into a future's tense.

 

Beauty shining ever glowing radiance

High into all sides of a heart that beats

Like wild drums echoing in the Heavens.

 

Hushed lips and soft kisses illuminate

The great world of what is yet to be

Their sacred moment in Luna’s light.

 

Ghost like hands taking that first hold

A beginning and middle with no end

While the stars shine their diamond cues.

 

Over the land, the seas and rivers divine

Shall be the path and journey, sails ready

Joyous in those thousand moments between.

 

Truth is finally weaving this bonded spark

Of rainbow hues and glistening clear eyes

As the tides of time fall within perfection.

 

Reviews

[smurfett]

Beautifully written Aaron! To me, it screams magical, almost like a secret love. This writing feels like every girls dream. The secrecy, forbidden meeting.....I loved it! And what's great about writings like this in my opinion, is that each and every person will probably get something totally different out of it. Your words speak to so many people in so many different ways. Beautiful ink my friend. Thank you

[Wolfwind]

Many thanks for your kind and wonderful words! I appreciate your time taken to come by and read this piece of ink. =) You are so correct, for it is within the myriad of interpretations that the joy of poetry comes to life for me.

[smurfett]

You are welcome my friend....

[Shy Girl]

That's one of the most beautiful pieces you've written. (the others are of course brilliant and all one of a kind) But this one you can feel ...or at least I can connect to the words personally. I know what it is that drew me in...its a story. A story that travels through time...skims raimbows...the quilt continues to add squares as the story knits together. The threads may change thier count ...some stronger...some fragile ...but all hold that quilt as it grows ever larger... :)

[Wolfwind]

I'm so glad that you enjoyed the poem! I really wasn't sure how it would turn out. I'm so used to 4 line rhymes, that going into a three line flow was a new and untested area for me. Many thanks for giving it such a wonderful review! It uplifts the spirit! =)