Money Saving

Saving money is money well spend

But money in the bank is not money in the end
It's there but it isn't
It's there but kept in your own prison

Serving time waiting to get out
That's what saving money is all about
So the question what you saving for
Really means what you waiting for 

Is it for that house you'll buy one day?
For that crazy night to blow it all away? 

Is it only for those bills you gotta pay?
Or just to simply let it stray?  

Having money means having a purpose
So think it through what you will do
Once it's spend it might not come back
And that's just a fact

The last thing to remember

Keep it for a rendezvous

Save your money 

So one day it can save you

Reviews

[DustyPegasus]

It was quite a chew and rhythmic. Despite that, you hadn't use any phrases or images, which makes its language part a bit less than it could be. I really like the idea though. To have a purpose. You've expressed it well and up to the point. No jumping back and forth. An up vote for that.

[Franky]

I enjoyed this! Lots of poetic everyday wisdom here well done!

[Lala]

Thank you so much Frankie! :D