Alone

Drown the sorrow, choke back a tear

And say goodbye to another year

So many wasted, what's a couple more?

No one's knocking on my door

 

Curl up to a memory that I hold

Offers little shelter from the cold

Think of you almost everyday

I offered my heart, you pulled away

 

(chorus)

I wanted you, I thouht you wanted me

I was clearly wrong, now I see

I Needed more than you could give

All alone is how I'll have to live

 

I force a smile and I fake a laugh

I'm torn apart and split in half

You took advantage, because I'm too kind

You broke my heart and still f**k my mind

 

Still deep inside, you're still missed

Carve the pain into my wrists

I kick my a*s and slam into a wall

Please lock me up in a hospital

I lost my heart, I lost a friend

Was it real, or all just pretend?

 

(repeat chorus)

Reviews

[theunionisloud]

Wow. Great work! Lots of emotion. The only thing is "Still deep inside, your still missed"... your should be "you're".

Nice rhymes, dude.

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

I can relate to this in so many ways its quite scary... You are absolutely amazing; this is a kick-a*s song. Feels rather different to other songs or poems on here that are of similar matter-this one feels real and honest... Well done!

[StacyPerry]

I enjoyed this. Glad you checked out one of my lyrics so I could befriend you and read some of your writings.

Keep an eye and catch up on some of the other ones as I have lyrics for the past few days and I have poems as well. 28 years of writing and I am in the music business as well as other things....keep in touch.

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