Exotic Love

Exotic Love

A Poem by WordNerd
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Love isn't a decision. It's a feeling. If we could decide who we loved, it would be much simpler, but much less magical.

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Scarlet eyes whisper through my mortal heart

Creatures coldly burn our bond apart

Your soul heavenly grows at night 

His eerie touch fears the sunlight

 

Affection dangerously thirsts for temptation

Immorality propels with devastation

His pale skin softens the morbid whether

Death falls as light as an angelic feather

 

His fangs beautifully rot my veins 

Your hypnotic voice delicately bites with pain  

My flesh strangely hungers with desire 

Tasting the love of a Vampire


Awards:


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Jun 4, 2011



1st runner up

Jun 11, 2011





 

© 2011 WordNerd


Author's Note

WordNerd
Thanks for the positive reviews, I extremely appreciate it :D
And for the negative reviewers, always remember this: "Critics are like eunuchs in a harem: they know how it's done, they've seen it done every day, but they're unable to do it themselves." - Brendan Francis Behan
I'll continue to write even when you bring me down!!

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Nice piece. I myself like writing about vamps, even if I hate Twilight with a burning passion. This describes old fashioned vampires though, the good old ones I have in my stories and not the terrible messed up ones that make no sense that people come up with now a days.....don't get me wrong I don't mean to offend anyone, but I have a right to express my opinion. Anyways, I love the image you included and the details are great for a short piece. Well Done.

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The perfect picture popped in my head when i read this is some what magical.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i agree with white princess

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...you have such poetic grace, your words blossom off the page. The darkness prevails. Enjoyable

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TJ
very wonderful piece. love the imagery and the emotion in this

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was amazing and such a nice piece. I loved the blending of colors, and the use of imagery. This was very, very good. Outstanding.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And now I feel like reading the Twilight Saga all over again. Lots of fun to read!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ah brilliant this, I enjoyed reading your work!

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Very nice. :) I like the contrasting colors and the imagery.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A brilliant dark piece............your hypnotic voice delicately bites with pain! Ouch!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Ok, so I don't really like vampires. Sorry, but it's still extremely well written :D
Love is insanely difficult. And it always will be. We just have to hold in there and remember that one day it won't be so hard anymore.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on May 23, 2011
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WordNerd

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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I'm a Nerd, who is an avid reader with a peculiar attraction to Literature, specifically, Fantasy, Mystery, Sci-fi, Comics books (Marvel comic books), Manga and Horror. I solely write poetry, how.. more..

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