Parallel Confusion

Unlock a world of possibilities

       A door echoes the sound of dreams
                    Two worlds blend in eternal fire
                        Pure sorrows manipulate the darkness
                                Music slumbers the chaos
                              Stars luster the teachings of wisdom
                           Ashes lightly splatter the moons
                  Clouds secretly remain
               Footsteps burn the elderly dawn

                 Destiny plagues an unearthly angel

                        Impossibilities in a guided sanctuary

                           Imagination reflects reality

                                 Leaving the realm of non-existence  

Author's Note

I hope this is decent :S
It's a little confusing but that's the whole point
the world of fantasy is confusing :S

Reviews

[Max]

Well, if the point is to be confusing, then it's successful :P It's very random and all over the place, which fits with the theme of fantasy and imagination. A creative person's thoughts are often very scattered, and this is why many of us are so bad at being organized :P

[ImagineItAll]

It is confusing, but since you said that is the point, I think you did it well! I like the format. It kind of gives the whole poem a literal wave feel to it, forcing the reader to constantly feel in motion. Helps add to the confusion :-)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Destiny plagues an unearthly angel on a daily basis........this is will written.

[RedInk524]

Interesting. A lot of symbolism. I like the line "imagination reflects reality". Its true.

[London]

i love how you did this, awesome job!

[brenda]

this is beautiful i loved it i go to that place all the time !!:)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

You have captured wild imagination so well here, great effort indeed:)