The Mean Officer(2)

an edited version

As a mean officer

Walked into a small store.

An object floated outside

Earth's atmosphere.

 

He cut in front of everybody

And ordered his meal.

He got his order

And went to his seat.

He ate grotesquely

Then he yelled

"This food is disgusting,

I'm never comin here again."

 

While the object floated

Closer and closer,

He stomped out the door

And left in a hurry.

 

When he got home

in order to cool off,

He decided to go camping

And so he did.

As he left,

The object entered

The atmosphere

And plummeted to the Earth.

 

When he got his campsite

It was night-time.

Then all of a sudden

There was a blinding, flashing light

And a meteor struck

 

The campsite vanished

Along with him.

Sometimes the universe

Gives you a freebie.

For who knows

What that mean officer

Could have and would have done.

 

Author's Note

please review. which is better. this or the first