Without You

I hate every day we are not together

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Without you I feel alone in a room full of people.

You are a part of me and I am not complete without you.

 

Without you time slows,

 

Nights are quiet,

 

And days are lonely.

 

Food seems tasteless,

 

Smiling seem meaningless,

 

And life is dull.

 

You are a part of me.

A part that I never want to lose.

Reviews

[Lucid Smile]

I know how you feel. When the person you love or truly care about is not by you're side, those things do happen, and it's even worse when you cant get them back by you're side. I love this because I can relate it to a relationship I once had. Good job.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Thats what you feel when you fall in love :) .... beautidul poem, full with longing

[My Fair Lady]

As a fellow writer- I like this. Kinda sad, kinda lonely. I get it because I know you, and I understand what you are going through.

As your teacher- perhaps the following would be helpful:
http://www.educationbug.org/a/lose-vs--loose.html

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

lovely heart drawn on paper in beautiful shape with words~