I'll Keep on Running

I shall keep on running.

Keep on Running

 

You set your fireworks in a bottle

I’ll keep on running.

 

Your lungs burst from screaming at me

I’ll keep on running.

 

A quiet whisper in my ear

I’ll keep on running.

 

A push or a punch

I’ll keep on running.

 

The narrowing of your eyes

I’ll keep on running.

 

Turn around

There’s nothing you can say

There’s nothing you can do

Turn around

I’ll keep on running...

 

 

 

By Theodore Ramwell

 

Author's Note

Inspiration was a silent discussion with my brain :)

Reviews

[Erotic Goddess]

Running from what...my mind imagined all sorts of things chasing eternally! I love this...it evokes thoughtfulness.

xxoxx

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the artwork. Made your words come alive. To escape can be difficult sometime. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[deeps]

I enjoyed this write, it's wonderful. Like the pic as well.

[David W Moore III]

I love the image of the first stanza - great set up to the rest of the piece...

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

fierce~ absolutely fierce~ the aura of dodging panic and the rush is so defined as to give the poem a movement all its own through emotive bursts in every line~

[Omar Fendri]

holy inspiration and I respect it
adorable and beautifully eccentric
touchable and full of emotion
it's a shinning side from the perfection :) i like it

[Flo]

First Time I ever seen friends together like this, anyways; Great poem, short,bold,simple but yet very powerful, I'll keep up with your work!
-Flo

[Closedown]

Great teamwork! I'll keep on running back to check out your future work!

[My Fair Lady]

You boys are at it again.. and with fury.. you are a fantastic team.. Keep up the good work.

[kylie]

I like this one, it shows perseverance to me in a very insightful and simple way. It is a very great piece!