My love

every person has emotions.so, i elaborated it

Iam seeking for love,                       but                                                       why their is no one for me,                        Is my heart is stone?                                or                their is no heart of mine,                       Dhak-dhak-dhak it beats but its not like heart,                                  It beats like the the bullet from my chest.     I am running with my heavy air on my nose,                                seeking for death but thenalso I unable to die,                           When I pass,      the street light blows,                           the roses fries,      all tries to avoid me,                                 but only one girl handle me gently,              I feel the softness on my spine,                when she touches,                                    I feel the hand  of an angel,                     I dont know Who is she?                              but whatever      She is my love.                                                             

Reviews

[Ashley.M.E]

This is a cute poem, not much for the set up, or the stretching of the screen.
Other then that the poem flowed very well, nicely done.