~ Barsoom

~ A Time Travel

 

  

 

~ Barsoom

 

 

Awake… and I am turning around,

I sniff dust in my nose, and feel the cold on my toes

Where am I? in the lost of days?

Or in the new beginning of time…

I sneeze Barsoom in the sand,

And as I look around, I follow my path

It could lead me to convince gravity as divine.

Jumps as big as I walked a lifetime

Time as fast as it was always so slow

Another oxygen smell to breathe and compel

To move me forward faster than quick

Even running  and turning in circles

Is easier as on Earth

I at least don't feel bored

The ways here are in the skyline

Ships here are not on water, but in the air

As energy flies, and only bad luck

Will crash the ship instead of sinking...

It's all relative for what you're used to.

Rivers on earth are here deserts of mystery

Faith of believe is nothing without history

A new beginning in another world

Will open perspectives and let go of routine

There is no way back from when I look up

In all the Earthly beauty I've seen

I must get used to all change,

And love again, without all the green...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

~ Travel before bed... Thank you xx

Reviews

[Chris]

rutine = routine?

I remember reading all the Edgar Rice Burroughs stories I could get my hands on as a boy. The sheer adventures and being the hero fired up the imagination and took me from the darkness of life to the magyk of hope and dreams. Your poem touched that magyk again for me Eli. Thank you!

Exactly dear Chris, we love the same literature ;) ooooh jeez, tomorow when it's day I look up my spelling thank you so much, always happy to have your honest critizism :)

E. L.

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I am a fan indeed! Your art is stunning...mesmerizing!!!

Many thank yous sweet lynn, you're too kind hihi, love your work as well!!! X

[Eve]

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I love this one, ok I love them all , but this one especially, because you are putting out there what so few know and those who do forget, it is sooo hard in the world today to hold the light so many things get in the way, door bells, phone calls, insecurities, distractions, disappointments, but we are all getting there I hope at least I hope :) beautiful again my friend!

Thank you love, for your beautiful review, and for picking that out. You're keen! I feel blessed to have you around! x

[Sugar Plum ♥]

really amazing, your point of view is so high, like talking from the voice of spirit, I love that in your poems! They always make me think and read them more than once! all verses have deep meaning and sense for me, they could be transformed into philosophy discourse, the contain the essence! so that`s the POETRY. Thank you so much for inspiring me!

Rivers on earth are here deserts of mystery

Faith of believe is nothing without history

Barsoom has much incommon with Egypt. ;) I loved it to be there yesterday night :D before sleep. Thank you so much Nia. We love to time travel, it is rich in us. Hugs xo

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I wish also to be now in Netherlands, to see the beauty of your country landscapes!

You shall soon dear! we can go see all the tulips in spring time :D

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Oh, you are so kind, I`ll come really and I hope soon! Before I become too old :)

Will wait you with open arms :) my friend

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully expressive and evocative words Elisa. Leaving a sense of sadness at what is gone, but there is still hope there for what is to come.

Wonderfully said Lorry! thank you :-)

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[Poetic Beauty]

The imagery is outstanding. You use all the senses and the story is adventurous

Yes, it was a meditation before sleep... I love to mind travel
Thank you.

[Aubin]

Again another great poem. I enjoy reading yours not only for the words, but the music adds a magical quality. As I have said before "Please keep writing".

Thank you, I believe in a complete delivered piece. As my mind in the moment felt it. Thank you again. Elisa

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

This, my friend, is very beatuifully written poem. I really like the lines you've written. I really like the theme, and I really enjoy how your image comes out in words. Brilliant and well done, Sweet Elisa

Thank you Gregster, glad I could take you with me to Mars for a second... ;)