~ How do I dream you?

~ How do I dream you?

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~ Beyond Love

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~ How do I dream you?

 

 

Let me paint you in picturesque colors

I love to dream you in forms and shapes

Let us embrace the singular emptiness

Within oily colors can’t merge

But artistic new strength will arise

For where we walk in silent purge

I love to dream you freely

In the core’s brightness of the eye,

Where you will be safer then

Floating otherwise or be lost somewhere

I dream you with putting myself aside

Half awake, barely alive in space

All I see is your light my love

Wherein I can dream and die

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


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Sigh.. why didn't I write this: ' I love to dream you freely ~ In the core’s brightness of the eye, ' .. what a deep love birthed that thought. Your picture and the accompanying words have a touch of magic. Beautiful and without guile or the urge to impress.. sincere.

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7 Years Ago

Thank you hon X



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Beautiful imagery projected in ones dreams,and put to paper quite nicely!
A good read, thank you for sharing.


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7 Years Ago

Thank you Mark , for being here tonight (in Europe). loved your words. :)
This is simply amazing. Very touching...the ending lines bring it all together so concisely and tragically...your work should be published!!

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7 Years Ago

Thank you with whole my heart LefthandWrite.... sigh... your words made me smile. (but it is too muc.. read more
Enchanting as is a dream, vibrant colors toned to lie perfectly together on the canvas of love. Such a beautiful poe, your words are silk to me.

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7 Years Ago

Wow, thank you again Jack, I'm really happy you like it, I feel honored to read your words, and shal.. read more
utterly beautiful, giving oneself over to absolute and reckless abandon in the face of love. there is nothing but raw honest emotion in this and it dances gently upon the heart when reading. one minor note, E L , i think that word in the first line is spelled picturesque....loved this write!

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7 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend for you lovely words, really. I was in doubt about that word, as Picture.. read more
quinfinn

7 Years Ago

my pleasure
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This is a very mystical and dreamy piece, my dear Elisa. The imagery melts off the page, and your use of metaphorical language is simply brilliant. "Let us embrace the singular emptiness, Within oily colors can’t merge" is such an amazing verse. Great job--as always :)

Ps. This piece is extremely handsome lol

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7 Years Ago

Ooh Mr. Cord, how I am grateful to have you by :) and thank you very much for your splendid words, w.. read more
this is beautiful in its lyrical quality...

hopefully what i dream matches the reality...often we dream what we want to see and experience...too good to be true? sometimes not...sometimes it's just that good.

jacob

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7 Years Ago

Thank you so much sir Jacob for your wonderful thoughts on my poem. It's nice to have you by. Thanks.. read more
how amazingly soft and warm these words care for their subject. A feeling and a flow you felt when you closed your eyes and let the emotion wash over you would be my guess. lovely write.

I am saving this one.

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7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ed, with whole my heart, your interpretation is a wonderful one too~ Thanks x
E. L.

Your words are pure and deeply meaningful. Compact, but complete. Wonderful piece of writing and thank you for sharing.

Patrick

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7 Years Ago

Thank you very much Patrick, so nice to have you by, very appreciateted!
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a dreamy one, full of beautiful images like a dream meant to wonder, like a surreal scenery of love, happiness, often horror but all the time an escape from realities bounderies...

an amazing journey my friend...

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7 Years Ago

Yes this one can go in many ways/layers... Thank you so much :)
Pax

7 Years Ago

I like that..seems really magical.. Your Very much welcome...

7 Years Ago

:))) x
amazing feeling of cosmic harmony, the deep dream awakes special inner senses, where we are in another world, our mind is not the same...i feel the wind of the dream, the picture is so clear and deep..Your dream is like other reality, but existing somewhere, as surreal photograph! truely wonderful, the dark-blue too!

nour~ xxx

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Sugar Plum ♥

7 Years Ago

not everyone could feel or understand how much your poems are deep!

7 Years Ago

Wow, you really got the point I wanted to bring over that means much to me sweet nia xx thank you

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