~ Little Swan

~ Little Swan, E.L. Elisa Laura, Ballet, Love, Dance, Free Style... Seasons...

~ Little Swan

 

 

Feel your flippers into the water

Dance your magnificent presence all alive

Turn skittish around your space

Preheat the world with your white beauty's grace

 

Move like a lady, in her beloved water

As an erotic dance on the axis you float

See yourself twinkle  in the morning sun

In the love of you being home

 

You peculiar character melts

On the lake when you companion

Deep soils, quiet area with silent bliss

Movement on the horizon’s kiss

 

Find your life partner through the light

In your flight from cold winter nights

By long trips to the south into hights

Where you land, and love your bridegroom

 

Your energy level touched real silence

You succumb prestige of all time through

With your wings white buckled, and flying

You will always freer draw those lines in hue

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xxx

Reviews

[Tree]

I appreciate the beauty of the swan, and have written about her, too. I thought you did a marvelous job of describing her in her element; graceful and pure. Truly one of the most exquisite creatures on the face of our little blue planet. If not the universe

Diego

Yes, she is... thank you dear Diego, she is rest and purity, and if we all looked a bit more inside her beauty, the world would be less rushing :) beautiful words...

[Corset]

Glowingly beautiful, as always dear friend, swans are so majestic and lovely just like you dear! beautiful El

I was a black swan lately... but I am slowly becomming white again lol ;-) JK dear... thank you so so much for your beautiful words... they always touch my heart X

[PurpleQuartz]

Magnificent like the swan itself!

Thanks dear one for your time, and words, I will come back for each of you xx

[MOON]

Beautiful delicate write as usual, love the title .

Thank you sweetie, Will come back for you and your artworks... have some patience with me X

[Levi Levin]

Excellent write! And I enjoyed the video:)

Thank you Levi :) I'm glad you enjoyed both.

[Sophia Marie]

Very soft and magical with how you paint this image. I felt as if I was there with you. Very beautiful

Thank you greatly Sophia, for your beautiful words, and I'm glad I could take you with me for a little moment :)

[captain]

so beautiful and lovely, free as the swan!

Thank you sweet Captain :) will be back soon for you! ;-)

[CS]

This is so lovely, Eli. The white. The pureness. Like the story of the duckling and the swan...it is transforming. It keeps becoming more. It finds its own beauty.

Great writing, sis :)

Aw sweet sister, thank you very much! :) glad you enjoyed this XXX

[Androglossia]

Do you compare yourself to a swan? Because it was you that I saw upon reading this piece:) The photo is beautiful, the font style is elegant, the concept is brilliant.

Thank you sweetheart X your words mean much to me.... xxx

[J. J. Nightingale]

With beauty
With snow-flake grace
You dance the dreams
of lovers
forever embrace..

Delicate .. sensual ... light and love-ly .... Jazz

Thank you dear Jazzy XXX

[J. J. Nightingale]

Hugs ,,, xxx

Hugs sweet woman X

[kublakhan27]

Lovely writing...a true piece of elegance :)

Thank you :)

[kublakhan27]

No problem :)