~ Dragged To

~ Dragged To, E.L. Elisa Laura, Progressive Metal, Love, Friendship, Pain, Hell, Heaven, You, Me, We, Life Music, Lyrics...

~ Dragged To

 

 

The deep oblivion

Of a minds Holocaust

Dragged me into “you”

And your refreshing water

Upon my soul, tickling

Like heaven’s feathers

As a riverside of your own...

While I became unconscious

Last night, within my walls,

You made me swim

Into your brain

As ink filled with

Your gossamer taste,

Of uniqueness in it’s wholeness

My precious soul...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

Author's Note

Full Album ;)
Thank you my precious friends X

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Lovely is the deep oblivion in which a soul can take you... through music, art, and ink...
To take you outside of your own walls, and into their mind is a beautiful thing...one can truly appreciate the connection. You have always been a magnetic force in sharing such exquisite dreams of oblivion... LOVELY WRITE!

Good review sis!! :) thank you for this... you have a great look on my little words :) xxx

[sithlordjp]

In this long tiring journey for words, I have found a home to rest...

That's beautiful my friend, you have the key ;)

[icelandicblue]

I experienced goosebumps when I read this. So much of life takes place within our minds. A truly riveting poem.

Thank you dear friend, I guess, that is what I wanted to bring also over yes... :) sometimes life is too beautiful to not have it... so I live 200%

[Tina Kline]

A brilliant poem! Love the imagery. You're very artistic and creative with words.
It's like magic!

Thank you so much, I feel honored with your words dear :)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

your writing fits the image perfectly and I could visualise her busy fishtail, splashing ahead, just beautiful and so imaginitively penned too

Sheema, cool you saw a mermaid in this write :D I so love your interpretations! Thank you :)

[PurpleQuartz]

Well Elisa, you've done more magic with your fabulous writing! I really loved the way everything seemed to fit perfectly in this one, and yet seemed to sweep you away.

Thank you so much PQ :) so glad to have you around!

[stephen dillon]

you are an amazing writer i wish i knew more about you

Aw thanks stephen, :)

[stephen dillon]

do you listen to progressive metal

Yes :)

[stephen dillon]

like who? i really like BTBAM and despised icon

Will mail you soon a few of my favs...

[hundi]

nice

Thanks

[David Scott]

It is often heard that one feels like they are beeing dragged through Hell. Yet here, you suggest that love can dragg you into and through waters of life and love. This is how we should live and think. Understanding the dark and knowing it is real, but giving in to the forces that would lift us out of darkness and bathe our souls clean.
I love your mind set here and the poetry supports the concept well!

Thank you David, you have always a good take on my words, much appreciated...

[Jack...]

Simply perfect and harmonious. This had a ring to it, a melody of distant bells calling us home to experience what had been kept inside always. This definitely quenched my thirst for beauty.

Oh Jack, what a nice take on my little words, very beautiful review, thank you :)

[quinfinn]

this is gorgeous in its entirety, wonderfully worded and penned to perfection. yes, our Elisa Laura has mad writing skills! i love your tender and loving heart....lovely!

Thank you very much my friend, for this lovely review. :)