~ Let me kiss the Silence

~ Let me kiss the Silence, Elisa Laura, E.L. A poem from out of my hiatus, forfeelings, birds, love, rest, life, spring, happiness, moments...

~ Let me kiss the Silence

 

 

My silent muse,

The only way I see you;

Is; “like a prince of forlorn decades”

The question is;

“Would you stay”?

When I will forget “the time”?

 

Sip from your glass of wine,

Finish the blood of pleasure;

We are falling stars of love…

 

For our sins we do

Control in our strength;

 

Days,  are maybe gone,

But nights lasts long

Longer than anything...

 

Let me drown, into your arms

That are velveteen steel;

Let me be forever there

 

For I feel safe, and home,

Next to your heart---

 

We were too soon,

On a frisky night of love;

A steamy place of grace,

 

Now we know flying time isn’t

Only important,

But level is…

 

The very soft sighs whereby

We see our muses flow

Richer than we still both breathe...

 

I embrace your gift,

Of another day;

The tattooed hearted love to stay,

 

For I am, just a simple glimpse

Into your whole universe

Of grace…

 

For now just let me kiss the Silence

Of your heart---

 

Because I’m near…

 

 

-           Elisa Laura

Author's Note

~ Let me kiss the Silence
was a write I made, when I hiked for a day long, I sat on my bench, in the sun, and there was a little bird, resting on a tree. I thought it would be nice, to share this into metaphor with you... for I don't believe I didn't felt a moment...
Thanks for reading, until soon my friends, when time permits. xx



- Elisa

Reviews

[Jack...]

On a lonely branch you watch me as I write, my thoughts and dreams fly to paper as you might to a new tree, on silent wings. Still I see you, though deep in thought of another who builds his nest in my heart, I fly to him on winds of spring as you my little friend, dance in the warm sun.

Very cool Elisa, so beautiful and warm and filled with love.

Thank you so much my good friend, from the road, for popping in on this a bit older write, so appreciated, have a good Sunday.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Eli, this one truly resonates within my heart! You have captured an array of emotions that are felt so deeply within the context of this piece.

An undeniable soul connection, many write about and are inspired to dream endlessly...
A high praise to the elusive and legendary muse, the one who truly bestows the zest and passion in your ink! This is stunning and sparkles in perfection. I absolutely love this!

"I embrace your gift,

Of another day;

The tattooed hearted love to stay,



For I am, just a simple glimpse

Into your whole universe

Of grace…



For now just let me kiss the Silence

Of your heart---



Because I’m near…"~ So beautiful...I would love to dedicate this to my own muse, for you have nailed it!

A Fave indeed!~xoxoxoxoxo~ :)

Robbie, thank you so much for this. You always enter my world, with such a grace, and you mean the world to me.... thank you Sis. xoxo so happy to have you by!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

What a beautiful gift you have Sis... I enjoyed this piece immensely, and am still reeling in your words!..it's my pleasure, this brought me so much joy!~xoxoxo~

Aw, the pleasure is all mine love, if I can make you reel, and smile I'm happy :) - xoxo - be back in a while to answer the mail :))) I reveived you!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Take your time sis... I still have to send you the rest of my thoughts, later... lol ;D
(will send after my long to do list)...enjoy your day! :)))

[wunder]

~Firstly - I Love-Love that Frida soundtrack!!!~also i love-love the lines-
~"let me drown, into your arms/that are velveteen steel;?let me be forever there"~
~you must have the sweetest most melodic little affairs with your muses~ ;)

Thank you dearly my friend, I love that soundtrack too, I'm a huge lover of the book and the whole movie either, it's very connected to me. LOL yes steel, read the man of gold ;) he's my muse too, in my second world... :D you're the best, thanks

[wunder]

~'the man of gold'-the hungarian book?~that's a university days title (god i'm old)~
~when i feel better - i'll put out a personal add for a muse~ ;)

Oh no, hehe... not the hungarian book....my poem hehe... no worries... :) take much care, don't rush, my poems won't walk away... first get better ok. :)

[wunder]

~HA!~well hell - i'm sick & old - you gotta cut my brain a little slack~lol ;)

I'm not cut anything, I only blow you healing wishes ;) lol haha

I do not cut, I meant or I'm not cutting... lol, ah, dinner and writing not goes well together ha!

[wunder]

~lmoa~i've ruined too many keyboards & mice to count while writing and eating~ :D

Hahahahaha.... I know the feeling ;-)

[wunder]

~lol~well hell i had keep a drawer full of mice and keyboards in my desk~lmao~ ;)

[Aethereal]

We all try to identify with that universe surrounding beautiful events. We may only glimpse at a pretty bird's world of relationship.

Little bird in the wood
I'd be you if I could.

Thank you for this rich agreement friend! :) glad to have you by!

[Sally Dinn]

Thank you Elisa, I love. hearing from your perspective

Thank you kind Sally Dinn for being here, reading here, and saying so... appreciated, I won't forget...

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Loved all deep feeling and forgetfulness in your poem, dear sis! I feel like coming home from far away, kissing the silence is wonderful expression...The muse is always near, if you want to catch it, if she disappear, our memories and our loves come! (I loved the sweet bird photo! :) so true:
Now we know flying time isn’t
Only important,
But level is…

-nour-
July-013

It is always near love... it is... it's next to my core. Thank you so much for being here and spreading your nour love.... :)

[Androglossia]

We all want to be the universe of someone dearest to us. But becoming the universe doesn't happen overnight because it will depend on the views and principle of that person. But we are human and we are capable to yield and surrender despite of our personal wants and needs. We are capable of sacrificing and/or accepting the smallest amount of happiness that love can offer. This is a very soothing write that lightens up the senses.

Thank you love for saying so, really. For me it's important not to touch real beauty, let me watch it, for you can find that through more of my writings, I'm a true lover of art, just by absorbing it, and be happy with it, it could be from distance, it could be close, it could be to an animal, a painting, or a muse, it is the way we brought up again yes... they always have learned me to observe, and be happy with platonic value, for it's even richer than to "have" it . Thank you so much for being here, dearest.

[Tina Kline]

A very powerful poem in its outstanding descriptions and imagery. A very creative and skillful write.
I really enjoyed reading this!

Thank you so much Tina :) happy you did!

[Souladareatease]

Beauty of Love and nature go hand in hand, depth felt as held in heart it flowed from Your Pen with grace...such a beautiful write!!!

Thank you so much my friend :) so pleased to see your thoughts !

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The need for love an emotional connection comes only when we seek it really, well done, good read.

Thank you Thomas for your time and review, I appreciate it.

[icelandicblue]

We can only truly love when we are free, then we can soar! When there is peace and harmony silence can be a comfortable friend. To sit in a room and not speak but feel is tremendously powerful. It's a beautifully delicate poem.

Yes dear, so true, oh I'm so happy to have you here, for I know you understand me always. :) Hope all is well my friend, thought a lot of you lately. Thank you so much.