~ Mirrored

...Look, and thou shalt see...

 

~ Mirrored

 

 

Sheer reflection seen, in the distance,

Eyes wide open, wings spread wide

You saw me coming,

         From a thousand spring times,

                   Waiting there down the river,

I never believed, I could be alive again,

To breathe after so many lifetimes, of death~

           But you gave me the hope,

To kill this purgatory

Where I’d wait for hell, too long,

Now in this realm, it all starts, whilst I’m gone

          And so you will live, be there,

      All with a drop of silence

    Mirrored through me, with me

Welcome to Elysion, my love,

           Feel at home…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Reviews

[Michelle N. H.]

It might feel as if looking into a mirror whilst looking into another's eyes and seeing their soul. There is similarity, yet a divergence, certain parts of opposition that come together to create completion, unison, and it is most powerful. You blend colors in the chamber of the heart. It is there forever, the entrance to your infinite land of Elysion, always accessible, and a shared home, ever reaching for the ones you love.. The whole time, I sensed the journey of a butterfly, a revival, and so a new beginning. It's as if someone showed the way, but it truly starts with one's own strength of mind, or heart.. I feel embraced every time I come here. It's just that vibe of yours.. xx

Thank you love, for this gorgeous review, sigh, if it wasn't you Shell, who get's me, I don't know anymore lol you really did felt/sensed all so well. It's true, there is a new beginning, a strong one, a real one, and I'm glad, to be there. And to take you with me on the journey! :) You are embraced with my two both arms, and you know what? your present brings luck... it protects real good ;) I'm so happy with it still everytime I look at it. ^^ Thank you immensely for your words, and friendship dear one. -xxx-

[Michelle N. H.]

You're most welcome. I'm happy to know that my little present does bring a bit of luck and protection. It was my hope he'd fit in with the rest, heh. =) Thank you too, for being a friend of mine.. It goes deeper than that. I apologize for my late response. x

Oh and he did Sis... He just fits in perfectly. Heh =) no worries my sweetest, I know you are not always have the possibility to come online there, p.s. is your laptop fixed? I hope so...you are missed, but as always around, love it! Thank you for being a friend of mine, heart to heart... Hugs -xx-

[Michelle N. H.]

My laptop is not yet fixed. Perhaps within this week it will. I'm using my phone at this moment.. Thank you as well, once again, dear Lis. xx

Oh it will take some time ofc. say hi from me to everyone, and have a nice morning dear!! -xx-

Oops WC-Glitch, my answer got cut off... so here again: Thank you dear, you've graced me with your insight on this one. You get it so well... goosebumps. And I have a weak for the Greek too, you will notice some of my older pieces are related to them as well. I'm so thankful, glad you enjoyd the mystery of this one, ((HUGS)) Lis -x-

[Sunny]

Very Awesome poem! The pictures go perfectly with this!

Thank you dear Sunny for the time and review, you are really kind! :)

[Sunny]

You're very welcome

[Lydia Shutter]

Elysion indeed....a place where the ideal is possible...where dreams are achieved....where fields of happiness are blooming with buds of bliss. Your words are silky smooth and velvety soft, Eli. When someone can be there when you are ready to leave the stress and strain of life, when they are waiting for you, that is all that matters. The depth of romance in this is delightful. Lydi**

Oh you really are the first, who get the clue ;) and named the "fields" I love you for that Lydi ^^ thank you very much for this review, it's filled with love and a heart, that is close to mine, and for we have seen so much of both sides, it's a bond, or understanding I feel with you. Really, a profound thoughtful review, I so appreciate it, and you :) knuffels... -xx-

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed, Eli, we do have a lot of shared experience...and I feel that when I read your words. Lydi**

Yes, we have, I have it with your work of art too, it's like it's really special when I read you. :) -xx-

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Elisa, I miss reading your writing. I really enjoy the images you written here, fantasy and surreal like. Though it does have a darker mood, it still is a beautiful and stunning write.

Thank you so much Greg, I wondered where you were. :) It's good to see you back! and to read your words again, I will come by for you too. (Now I have more free time). Eli

[Inda]

Intriguing and I have to say your works usually put me in almost a yoga-like calm, there's something about your style that I often find very soothing. I quite like it and this while it had a lot of energy to it also had that calm voice if you will. Just fantastic!

Oh thank you so much dear Inda. Your words make me happy. :) Thanks for being always here. -x-

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I always feel calm and relaxed here...wandering through the beautiful gardens, running my thoughts through the crystal clear streams, swaying to the breezy melodies. I've missed this in my absence...my sister of serenity:)

Thank you my dear Sister, I've missed you! I'm so happy you feel calm and relaxed here. Your words calm me too! -xxx- :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

more than enjoyed...such a beautiful poem of love and redemption...

bringing one back to life...to be able to love again and get out of that purgatory of feeling nothing, just waiting for the end.

there is hope.

Thank you so much Jacob, what a wonderful review from you, yes, there is hope, you got me perfectly. :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Elisa...

...you put yet another verse in print here...
the translation of this speaks much in the lines of your words...
...and the images create a visual out look with in this passage...
and indeed the last lines:

Welcome to Elysion, my love,
Feel at home…

...the afterlife...can't wait to go there...yet I have much to write about before then...

Thank you so much my friend, for being here. And leaving your thoughts, so appreciated! :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...

[Kelly Scheppers]

You make me feel I have so much to learn...what a joy you are to read, Eli!

Kelly
xx

Thank you so much Kelly dear, your words bring me a huge smile, ((HUGS)) -x-

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Another poem of yours that is sheer bliss… there is magic in your pen that flows onto your page.

Thank you very much my sweet friend :) as always, I will be back ;)