~ You Transport Me

... A Love Poem ...

 

~ You Transport Me

 Innocent, and pure

Your love is

You are the dream

In my nights,

The clouds in front

Of my thoughts,

My warm light

All over

 

The episodes

Of time,

For years

The love-locked,

In the chambers

Of my heart

 

The song

Of my morning

The poetry

Of my soul

The silence

On perfect

Moments

The thunder,

And rain

When words

Fail to speak

 

You transport me

To worlds

I’ve never seen

Your voice

Sings songs

Of unheard

Melodies

 

Within the arms,

That are you,

Let me stay,

Be treasured

Kept, and be loved

For who I am

 

Within the hope,

That is us

May we dare

To explore

The road of life,

Before we die?

And after,

May I whisper us

 

“Eternity?"

 

 

 ~ Elisa Laura

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Foxemerald]

As I step upon your words, my feet touch an unbelievable path of love and hope. I feel as though I were moving along the road inside the interior road-map of the heart. This 'heart' which you have portrayed, beats with inspiration and joy. The words are like short bursts of clouds that grace the expanse of Heaven. At once, they unite, shelter, love and treasure. The smooth, shining purity it offers portrays a celebration- one that embraces, and finds joy in the intrinsic self. They remind one of the natural grace which God gives to humanity. They also reminds= us that, in spite of human trial, there is promise of tomorrow. The words that you wrote here are those that are etched into the heart of every human soul. They offer more than artistic talent; they provide us with the gift of unison, an inimitable joy most cannot replicate. Thank you for offering a balm to the spirit, and for letting us read this- your words are indescribably treasured.

Dearest Brooke, what a wonderful review, your words cone from another world if you ask me, ;) they are so rich, and full of compassion, and warmth, that's a thing, I treasure about you dear friend, you are certainly a person who really reads a work, and can give one of the most sincere and heartfelt reviews, you do always, and I can't thank you enough for this one, having you by is pure grace and happiness for every writer... Thank you dear Brooke, much love.

[joshua deathdealer]

Sometimes the greatest stories ever told are in silence and then the morning comes. And what a morning that will be.

This love you speak of sends shivers up my spine. A pure love..An unadulterated love.. A timeless love.. It brings a smile to my face and skips in my heart then tears to my eyes..at work none the less. lol ^^

Always I am lost and found in your words instantaneously. Your voice never wavers. Never falters. You are the treasure. xx

Oh Josh, sweet bestie, your words touch me, as they always do, I got a few notifications from you about this one, I always love it how you edit a poem, review or anything. It's beautiful to read every single thought on every different moment. Thank you for the beautiful words here dearheart -xx- much love

[joshua deathdealer]

Yes I was trying to review from my cell phone at work but it wasn't working out so well so I waited till I got home. Thank you and you are welcome. This is gold my dear. Pure gold.

Your words mean the world to me my dear dear friend, thank you so much, I'm on my phone now, I know what you mean lol... Have a good rest in a bit for your other night shifts, take care, will come by for your latest when I'm home ;) -xxx- :)

[joshua deathdealer]

As yours does to me.. Ok I am off tonight and for the next couple of days so we'll catch up. Have a safe trip and enjoy your day. xx

That's great, yay! We will do, thank you, I'm far from home now, be back later though, you know my restless travel butt lol take good care.. :) -xx-

[willweb]

Your poetry Elisa, always transports me to a beautiful paradise that I never want to leave from. I am in love with this poem.

I'm honored and beyond pleased to have your thoughts, and words by my friend, thank you...
I'll be back for you later tomorrow... :)