~ Neon Love

~ Some clues are just remarkable

~ Neon Love

 

The glimpse of your love is as

The tides of all seasons,

Reflected in your eyes

Of happiness you sparkle

 

Your passion wrapped in mine

Merged into one

Is like some candy on a hot summer day

As I taste sweet within your sugar

 

The walks we make,

Are  exciting and warm-blooded

The tickle of sand between the toes

And your arm around me

 

Let me live and thrive

In full colorful glory

Without much need or to do,

Your presence is just gold

 

Neon Love, as you are completely

With the blue reflectance of the tides

Your radiation does illuminate

And your salty strength breathes life

 

Where I will get lost in

And you may find me

Within the strength of love

And blue oceans to follow

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Steven]

First, I loved the picture. I felt like I was at some sunset bar drinking scotch. Especially with the music. Then I looked at the lights again, and frowned, thinking how ugly it would all be in the morning, lol. Anyway, you captured those moments well, portrayed them artfully, and I for one felt the impact. Nice write.

Thank you Steven :)

[ghost writer]

love the picture..a bold statement of love and understanding..As I taste sweet within your sugar...I love that line :)

[Sahar moonlight]

wow,such a beautiful poem.
it gives a feeling of warmth.

And i loved most this part:
Neon Love, as you are completely

With the blue reflectance of the tides

Your radiation does illuminate

And your salty strength breathes

Its so beautiful

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Let me live and thrive
In full colorful glory
Without much need or to do,
Your presence is just gold......
..........................beautifully written. wonderful. with regards.

[Cassie Fraga]

SUCH A SWEET WRITE!! makes me smile with ease... so beautiful!! **throws roses at the screen**
I love the romance in this write, and appreciate the strength of love!! GREAT WRITE SISSY!!!

[Michael X]

where the waves crash upon the shore of the spirit, and every moment is something new,
such is love when the sun is setting a lover's eyes, then comes the dream, romance is a
brilliant facet that makes for an endless beautiful wake that ripples across the reader's mind
and we can do nothing but drown in the moment, remarkable expression, magical ^_^

[Jack Isaac]

How many poems can there be that make you smile all the way through? For the answer, just count the peoms written by this author :) The lucky one to walk with her upon this beach will be colorfully amazed at the neon tide and all the strength it's radiance ushers in... and will be more amazed at the music this love plays. Tis remarkable indeed, this poem of yours, well written sentiment well said.

[dillonjensen]

Quite beautifully written. This is hope for me, to one day find a girl that will make me feel this way and be forever lost in her eyes, intertwined in her heart, and stuck in her memory. The last stanza makes me think of a warm, beautiful, sensual thing called love, and no matter how much or how many times two people argue or are in conflict, at the end of the day love is more powerful than any conglomeration of words put together.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Eli, you articulate beautifully ...this lulls me like a summer breeze...

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Beautiful, my favorite part: Let me live and thrive

In full colorful glory

Without much need or to do, how I like to live, peacefully.........