Feeling Ticklish

The generosity of one touch...

Rising through my body

Tingling my bare skin

I feel the wonders

As the sensation starts to ring

Delightful quivers

And I chuckle deeply

I feel myself shiver

From the rushing energy

As the dictating rush...

Continues to slither

Driving hard

Oh so idealistic

Against my conscious

Painted over my body

How artistic

The touch is dreamy

Yet I'm wide awake

And as the aura continues

I can't detect it clearly

This feeling is foreign  

A foliage in a desert

An instinct that is storming

My stomach wildly churning

Gradually the shaky reaction

Disappears

As I'm left with satisfaction 

No longer paralyzed...

And from my eyes escapes a joyful tear.

Author's Note

Are you feeling ticklish? :)

Reviews

[Otsana]

This is amazing! I never thought that I would read a poem that was actually describing the feeling of being tickled and yet you have done it and managed to keep my attention through the whole thing and I liked it. Great job!

[Paige Allison Willmont]

That is such a marvelous write :)

~Paige .

[~Lizzy♬]

I loved this! Wonderful write! :)

~Lizzy~

[.Lost Soul.]

I like this one Ashy! Good write :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Laughter is a good thing. Without laughter life would be lonely and boring. I like the description in the fun poem to read. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote