Those Eyes I have drowned

Her eyes sparkle bright blue light.

Skin tight dress, pearl white,

Shoulders left skin bare.

Sun bleached hair,

Her peach perfume in the air.

Long tan legs crossed,

Her beauty priceless cost.

Who's this Jane Doe?

My curiosity continues to grow,

Her silent song a bitter floating floe. 

Let me hear that doll voice.

Tell me your name, your choice.

Oh, let me hear that pretty sound,

The air around me it does surround.

In your eyes I have drowned.

Author's Note

I ask that you review honestly and tell me your honest thoughts and feelings about this poem.

Reviews

[Dreamer]

very good visual descriptions, I could see the woman exactly as you described her

[Jake Dyson]

A very interesting poem, I really liked it. I could picture watching this woman being created before my eyes as you described her very well I might add. Keep it up :D

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. I tried to understand the view of the writer toward the girl. The description felt like someone trying to figure out a crime. I enjoyed the poem. The goal of a writer. Create thoughts and mystery. You did. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote