A love so lost

I tried you and you didn’t care
everything you did to me wasn’t fair
You told me that we where a good pair.

I tried you at my weakest
you couldn’t accept me with a demise
it was my darkest of times.

To leave me the way you did
it started to seem like a trend
but all in all you just wanted it to end.

I truly loved you so
but where you wanted go
I could not fallow.

So we had our good times
it was so divine
I lost track of time.

Now you say we need to say goodbye
because you can’t accept me in the darkest of times.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad poem. No separation is good. Hard when two people fall away from each other. I understand the journey of this poem. Darkness will take over till we find reason to become alive again. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Chesney W.]

a good poem.. love lost, sad.... but still a truly great write.

[TaylorH'sPoems]

This was awesome.