~ The Poetic Mosquitoes

~ The Poetic Mosquitoes, E.L. Elisa Laura, Fun with words, Mosquitoes, To replace yourself for a day into one parasite...

~ The Poetic Mosquitoes

 

 

The Poetic Mosquitoes,

They dance, look, and fly;

Circles around the light,

 

They are hungry, they want,

They always fly out of sight

The Poetic Mosquitoes,

 

Armed warriors, in the air,

They think large, nor small,

They are forever musing after all,

 

And when you don’t expect them,

They suck your essence fair,

 

Watch out!

 

The Poetic Mosquitoes just

Will be there…

 

Slurping, your poetic blood

From your Poetic brain

From May until the fall,

 

The Poetic  Mosquitoes,

Are around, and they simply

Do watch you all…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Dear readers, ghost readers, and little mosquitoes,
Have fun! :) (I thought, being bitten so many times, on my
nephews wedding party tonight how it was to replace myself into a mosquito).
Another experiment. Have fun!

Enjoy! xx

Reviews

[Holly Mason]

an experiment well executed ....bbbbzzzbbbzz
love the intertwining thoughts that I have when reading this...amazin' beauty writer
now I wonder what was your hypothesis...hahaha*)
this is just a great write from content to concept from thought to your words-adored it
bbbzzzbbbbzzzbbbzzz....and I hate that spray bad for the ozone and so darn smelly...*)
wonder what you use on poetic mosquito's....pens with no ink, oh no wait this is a new era...
Wi-Fi signal drop.....hahaha just kidding see how fun this piece is?
have a super great beauty writer kinda day...and thank ya for sharing

Haha, thank you sweetheart xo, Oh it was pretty simple... ;) read the authors note lol... I find it most lovely everyone reads this one into his/her own way... :) I like your bbbzzzbbbzzzbbbzzz moments :D It's just we have so much mosquitoes here in this clime and hot / humid temperature right now, I was bitten so badly yesterday lol, I forgot to bring my spray... my nieces and friends too, everyone was bitten, we were all doomed. LOL. That's a great interesting thought... it could be typ-ex, ink eraser, or maybe magic lol.... I laugh about this fantastic review, thank you dear Holly, (a little later this evening I try to read your fantastic experiments, and poetry) can't wait :) xx

[kublakhan27]

Ah yes, we are a pesky lot aren't we? Perfect metaphor...nice song choice too haha Great work hun :) xo

Aw, thank you so much !!! oh dear, you don't want to see me right now lol, I'm one wiggeling walking mosquito bite... ha!! xo I was on your page 5 times tonight, I am reading but my i-net connection is very slow, I think it hates the weather too... ;p

[kublakhan27]

Haha I could say the same about myself, unless you don't mind a tipsy mosquito ;p But even on my saddest days you make me smile, and humble me with your visits :) My connection is awful as well, but that's mainly because of an aging computer, not to mention the thundershowers we've had the past couple of days so I sympathize with the weather issue ;P Always a pleasure reading your poetry my friend :)

Hahaha... what did you do dear? lol tell it sister :P no just kidding... Oh your computer is grumpy either, my laptop just don't loves me tonight, it's brutal and huming. I think it has too much dust in it lol... ;) :P You make me smile always too, it's way too serious here now and then don't you think?! I know you do sympathize with it, me too, when thundershowers come, I always have a headache before .... and am moody, people around me, escape lol... haha
Love to you, I try to come over... :P

[kublakhan27]

Haha sister...that made me laugh ;) Hope your computer is treating you better today my dear, and the weather is not giving you a headache...actually I hope you're out enjoying the weekend in some way...talk to you soon, love ya :)

Haha, hey dear bro, I took my computer with me over the country, now it's resting back home again lol... no headaches today, only fun... :D hope you're doing great too, I will pop in now and then, for you and some close friends... be back soon to review more love ya too! xo

[A.J.]

oh how I loathe those things.. the literal and the literary. great poem!

Hehe me too! thanks :D you had to see me yesterday night LOL, I was full of those nasty bumps... that was my inspiration, (I know I have sweet blood lol) just kidding ha...

[Jack...]

I have always wondered what that buzzing was around my head everytime I write...is it a coincidence that Poet and Pest both begin and end with the same letter, both have four letters and both are only differentiated by an s and an o. So, I guess I could be either. Very cute my friend. here's something else I noticed...cute poem, cute poet. :)

Haha Jack dear, thank you for your fantastic imput on this one, love it *big smile overhere*

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

True poets always stop and place it in the world around them because true poets see the connection and just how to place it in the world around them and I must say nobody else has thought of this. You must be the s**t ;)

Hihi lol thank you dear Amber Betty-Marie, it was meant actually as a write out of nothing, just of a moment with me and my family lol, never ever expected so many reviews...(for this isn't my normal genre/style/whit, but it was pretty fun to do)... I thank you greatly for being around :)

[Amber Betty Marie Childers]

make everything out of a moment doll
you smashed it

Awww, thanks so much dear... I already read you, I do love it! can't wait to concentrate fully on your work! :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

WOW! Talk about cryptic, yet to the point... I totally get this... YOU CLEVER WOMAN!

The thing about mosquitos, they suck your blood and leave swollen bumps that itch for days...
and we are left scratching until we bleed...
in the end they multiply and come back for more... The best repellent is "SHUT UP" spray...
and I believe you have plenty of that. ;)

LOVE THIS SIS! XXXX

Haha hey Sis... oh thanks a lot, I would never thought this one would bring so many different thoughts, and reviews, it's pretty fun. :) Thank you so much for yours love, you always see my humor, and how do I love the idea of a SHUT UP spray lol, you're a genius haha.... xx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

That spray works all the time. :D
Loved this write... it's so sassy! Like YOU! (he he)

Hehe.... oh Sis, you had to see me and my cousins... we were just in pretty dresses, but everywhere we had those bumps... and we were all itchy LOL x

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Don't know why "Smells like Teen Spirit' was playing in my head. Enjoyed the journey of the poetic mosquito thirsting for blood. They've been eating me alive all summer. Splendid read and write.

Haha thanks my friend, see? they are annoying... yesterday I was bitten all over. Thanks for the fun, and your review :) I will come back for you!

[Souladareatease]

To me, this speaks of those who circle writers and suck their poetic, creative flow for unfriendly reasons ---echo Friday on this fine Write!!! thats exactly where my mind went...seems in life real or virtual creativity and uniqueness gets stolen or stifled/shadowed...Never for too long...but long enough to feel it's effects---this was a nice and twisty Write---i miss Nancy

Thank you my friend for the echo and review... :) (not what I thought though when I wrote this on my notebook at the wedding) but it's fun how everyone interprets, and it should be that way. For it brings the reader his/her own thoughts. With Nancy you mean a woman? or the city in France? ;)

[Souladareatease]

Indeed, most Writes SHOULD have a few interpretations don't You think:) sometimes it's fun simply to see how many angles one can make into one sentence--hehe Nancy--I sigh to Nancy France...but alas No My Dear-Twas Sinatra;) --You wrote on Your notebook during the wedding...for shame all focus should have been on the ceremony and gala ---don't tell me the poetic mosquitoes were the exchanging rites :) ...I jest...sort of hehee...Beautiful Write no matter how interpreted :)

Aaaah ofcourse, LOL.... I was too tipsy I think when we came back lol... ;-) head foggy. :P yes, that song, is one of my old time favs, for I have so many good memories to it... The song of Sinatra was playing there, for it was the Indonesian/Moluccan side of my family, and Indo Blues, and oldies are always played in live bands, when we celebrate... I wrote a few keywords/sentences, ( I always do everywhere even on the toilet lol believe me...) ask my friends ha... and then it becomes a moment catching write... thanks a lot my friend, for your answer.

[Souladareatease]

Indeed--the random etchings for big pictures--mirror-mirror...I think its a must in writing...music as well...quick thoughts upon sparks----Painters think that way too-----I wonder how clay artists jot down ideas...do they grab random pieces of dirt and throw water on it, quickly making a shape?

I'm a painter and clay artist too, pity enough can't do it as much anymore as I prefere, but we always go with my dad, and his whole painters fam, to france now and then, expose, and paint... it's just merging the art till you have something like this LOL: "http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PDZcqBgCS74" haha.... ;) no with all do respect, it's an art appart...

[Souladareatease]

hehe agreed:) Interesting Tales--Lovely I thank You!!!

[Aethereal]

This was fun to read! Mosquitoes must be careful not to suck their poetic victims dry on Friday nights outside of barrooms for there's far too much alcohol in a victim's blood then. Drunken mosquitoes and vampires are often seen waddling about crashing into walls on Friday nights.

Haha my friend, your review makes me laugh, and is outstanding either... this way I didn't thought yet, and is also possible... :D I see it happening, in front of my eyes now, very vivid, thank you....

[Coyote Poetry]

Mosquitoes are small and very dangerous. Waiting for a prey and taking without fear. I like the concept of the poetic mosquito. Writers sucking out knowledge to rebirth on paper. The music is very good also. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Thank you so much my friend, I like your interpretation too, it's also possible... it's pretty fun how many directions you can go, just by some mosquitoes. :)