WHY

WHY

A Poem by WriterInside07
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song lyrics-neo-folk ballad

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Why
by Patricia L Francis - Copyright © Patricia L Francis

Why is it so easy to hang on
when lettin' go is
what's needed
all along

Why do I still care
if you love me
why does your anger
still affect me

Though it's been years
since I've seen you
not a day goes by
when I don't think of you

I tried to talk to you
without disguise
tell you who I am
without lies.

What you gave in return
broke my heart.
Judgment, disapproval
tearing me apart

It's long past time
to move on
forget your letters
that never come

As the light dawns
my footsteps falter
seems you've forgotten
I'm your daughter

So why do I still care
if you love me
why does your anger
still affect me

Why is it so easy to hang on
when lettin' go
is what's needed
all along 

 

© 2011 WriterInside07


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so beautiful, yet so sad. I can relate to this piece, I have not seen my bilogical father since I was a baby, this hit my heart.
Thank you for entering my contest

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh this is so beautiful and it touched me in a very personal way also. The more of your words that I read the more that I think you are one of my soul sisters or something. You need to check out some of my writing and tell me what you think. I have been experementing with different styles lately though so please read a couple of them to get the full effect.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. Love All, Mejasha

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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