The little Things

The stars in the sky

Always seemed so bright

Like they were so fragile

But still shined their light

The moon always big

Would follow me where I would go

Showing me im being watched over

Making sure I always know

The crow I always admired

So secretive and silent

Until bringing meaning

Then acting so violent

The trees that it would hide in

Always stood above over my head

Making me feel powerless

Even though they all seemed dead

The summer flowers

Always made me smile

Even though they all died

I knew they were there awhile

The grass I loved to feel

While lying down in the sun

Bringing me warmth and joy

Like on earth, I was the only one

Butterflies would always come out

Like they wanted to play

The colours they would wear

Would always make my day

The sound of the wind

Always gave me chills

Running down my back

But I did enjoy the thrill

The clouds looking so grey

Always seemed so sad

So when it started to rain

I always felt so bad

The thunder seemed like screams

Like shouting from above

But when this was all over

I always knew that I was loved

Reviews

[Shannen Forrester]

Sorry for the delay in reading :)
Really good, remember your punctuation, and again a little long for my taste, but otherwise really good. Interesting read with some nice imagery, good rhythm and good emotion. Well done :)