A letter that changed her.

A letter that changed her.

A Poem by Katie The Neko
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A poem about an army wife..

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The sound of a rumbling engine 
The crackling of leaves along the road 

A man in a suit and tie stood at her door
Her eyes started to water as she felt a pain in her core
Before he could speak she fell to her knees onto the floor

The letter she feared was in his grasp 
He gave her a sincere look and didn't know what to ask

She nodded and told him shed keep in touch
She added his number into her clutch

She tried to keep busy almost all of the time
Every picture she saw she would say, "stay strong" so she wouldn't cry

Numb
Nothing seemed to take away the pain

Tears rolled down her cheeks with a bottle in hand
Anything else she could use would cost her a grand
She tried to work out even ,watch her favorite bands
The only thing she wanted was her man

© 2014 Katie The Neko


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Katie The Neko
This is a poem that popped into my head.
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Aw, sadness. =( War tears so many families apart, either temporarily or permanently. Even when they do come back it doesn't mean they are the same after the things they have witnessed. You captured her pain excellently, and really made me feel for her.

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Katie The Neko

10 Years Ago

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it :)



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This is a tragic write and you did a great job of conveying the emotions.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Written in a very serious note..touchy :) beautifully written :)

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Katie The Neko

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
It is very chilling reminds me of Whiskey Lullaby, and that song just makes me cry and this poem caused pain in my chest! it has a very good flow which is wonderful!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Katie The Neko

10 Years Ago

Glad it reminds you of something but its all me :)
Aw, sadness. =( War tears so many families apart, either temporarily or permanently. Even when they do come back it doesn't mean they are the same after the things they have witnessed. You captured her pain excellently, and really made me feel for her.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Katie The Neko

10 Years Ago

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it :)

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Added on August 8, 2014
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Katie The Neko
Katie The Neko

elgin, SC



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My name is Katie. I'm a creative 24 year old with lots of ideas that like to randomly scrabble my mind. I love short stories, romance, poetry, spoken word, songs, and expressing feeling through writin.. more..

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A Poem by Katie The Neko