Paint me a Picture

Love poem

Paint me a Picture

 Paint me a picture of how it could be,

 Me in your arms, you loving me, 

 Paint me a picture of sweet smelling bliss, 

A soft gentle touch, your warm tender kiss, 

 Paint me a picture with stars in your eyes, 

With sunshine and rainbows filling the skies, 

 Paint me a picture, with your finest brush, 

Softly and simple like the sound of a hush, 

 Paint me a picture; use the colors of love,

 And send it to me, on the wings of a dove.

Reviews

[Brandy]

' Paint me a picture with stars in your eyes. ' This thought is so delicate and dreamy. There's something about the sky that leaves me in awe. Clouds colliding and the moon is magical in every way. You truly have painted a beautiful love poem with your words.

[Trace]

Thank you so very much for reading and sharing your thoughts, your comments and compliments are always appreciated.

Trace

[Kelly Scheppers]

Love the repetition of the line throughout each stanza, and the romantic overtures. Keep the love alive, Trace. Let the passion flow!

[Trace]

Thank you so very cool my dear friend for your wonderful compliments on my poetry.
I always love seeing your comments.

Huggs, Trace

[Trace]

Not sure how spellchecker changed much to cool, but, hey maybe it knows more than me.

[Arundass TP]

Beautifully written poem. Enjoyed reading

[Trace]

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and compliments on this poem.

Trace

[Mira]

I enjoyed the flow of your poem. Thank you for sharing your words.

[Trace]

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and compliments

Trace

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful dance of words Trace. We do paint pictures of beauty and hope. Sometimes we paint negative also. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I did enjoy.
Coyote

[Trace]

Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments and compliments.
Nice to see you.

Trace

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Trace. Had a 10 day flu. Finally some energy to write and read.

[Vol]

Trace,
I have never been able to write songs... this is a good one and somebody should do it!
Vol

[Trace]

I have written a few but have a hard time putting music to the lyrics.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and compliments on this piece.

Trace

[Lisasview]

Hi Trace,
Love poems are amount my must favorite.
Your is so lovely and one can feel that is was written from the heart💕
Lisasview

[Trace]

Thank you for reading and your wonderful compliments on my work.

Trace

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome…
Lisasview 7pm in Spain

[ETERNITY]

This poem perfectly captures the love between you and the love of your life.
I've seen how you two entwine as if you are vines of the same tree.
This is really beautiful, Trace, I'm sure she adores it and you.
Such a lovely dedication to your soul mate.
The words flow like a love song. Amazing .

[Trace]

Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments and compliments on this poem.
Your thoughts are greatly appreciated.

Trace

[MCS]

Sweet tender read.
Thank you, enjoyed.

[Trace]

Thank you for your wonderful comments and compliments.

Trace