After Last Night.. {chapter 7 of 8}

Number 7 in the Nght series Poetry inspired by the artwork of Drew Darcy

After Last Night

 

The moon was peeking through the blinds

As the two lay there in bed

With unashamed smiles on their faces

Their hair tousled ‘bout their heads

 

Can I fix you something to eat

It’s way past dinner, he said

Oh my, it is almost morning

How about a snack instead,

 

They were both justly exhausted

From their euphoric exuberation

Then naked as Eve, she stole away

And returned with a juicy temptation.

Reviews

[Dessi]

How you lure the reader along! So mesmerizing.
And tie everything up into a neat ending.
I am trying to learn to do that, pull my thoughts together.
They want to jump all over the place.
Thanks, Trace... Hey! After Last Night inspired me to write Slow Hand...so there ya go.

[Trace]

I need to go check to see if the pictures are still with the poems.

Thank you for your wonderful comments and compliments on my poetry.

Trace

[Dessi]

I didn't see any pictures but my imagination is good. Combined with your words, Trace, explosive.

[Trace]

Each of the series is inspired by the artwork of Drew Darcy. I will need to go back in and edit and resubmit the pictures.

[Dessi]

uh huh, I see, yes, good idea,

[Brandy]

She ' returned with a juicy temptation. '
An apple . .
Hmm, seems a little suspicious to me.

I'll just read the next one and see what happens.

The paintings really go with your words.

[Trace]

I never give the characters a name in this series , but it may be possible that they could be Adam & Eve. Lol.

Can you imagine when the first humans figured out the secrets to intercorse?

Thanks for reading and commenting on my Night series.

Trace