4/20

Meh, I don't know about this. But here it is.

An autumn chill
On an April day
Head in the grass
And the clouds the same
Move at a slow pace
Do not push too hard
The door will open
When your mind's ajar

Seed and dirt and rain and sun
Bring to me the happiness that I have grown
Open up the stale closet
Locking inside my hatred, depression, apathy, and anxiety
Setting myself free
Will you join me?

Reviews

[BL]

Can't go wrong with a 420 poem, nice.

[Dream_Traveler]

this is so beautiful, and easily understood.

[Katchzen]

I love how this can have different meanings. It could be about weed, or just about Spring, or even spiritual growth.

[Meredith Leigh]

Haha yeah I was expecting someone to write a 4/20 poem. Anyhoo, the description was great and the flow was still awesme, despire the fact it was all about getting high haha. Great work!

- Kriss

[Jinx's Heart]

Wow! This poem practically expresses my anticipation for Summer to arrive. :) I'm nearly speechless. You express emotions so well in your work. They are well intercepted by the reader (well, I feel them anyways). Another awesome writing! :)