Exit (Wound)

Exit (Wound)

A Poem by Wunderlich
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Yyyup.

"

You led me on like a faithful hound
Took me out back with the promise of snacks
Looked me in the eyes and didn't say a thing
But everything you didn't say was said right away

I feel like a fool, an emotional tool
To help you unwind in these negative times
Black and white with no positive in sight
Well now you're just fine and I'm used and dry

You led me on like a faithful hound
I took that chance and failed that test
And now you've placed this gun in my face
The bullet went in my head but came out my heart
Feeling like feelings aren't feeling very smart

© 2009 Wunderlich


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Ah, I love this, very much so.
The meaning behind this is frackin true.
I've played games with people before, and had them played on me
and it is very much like this.
Greatt write!
-Elissa :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow! This piece is fantastic! A deep, vivid look at what happens when
people play games in relationships. Awesome write!
-Chey

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is completely brilliant. I think I've said that on all of my reviews for you...but it's so true!! You have incredible talent and this right here is amazing. So dark and deep. I love it.
"Looked me in the eyes and didn't say a thing
But everything you didn't say was said right away"
So meaningful and true.
-nicole was here-

Posted 14 Years Ago


Woah!
This is bloody brillant, fantastic time. Your quite good at this. lol and your awesome you like left for dead! XD

Posted 14 Years Ago


Could you please change the title to "Promise of Snacks!"



Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on June 7, 2009
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Wunderlich
Wunderlich

Marshall, VA



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