To you my friend

A poem between two friends

To you my Friend
And it comes to this my friend...the bitter truth to our life's end..
The misery of our past consumes...leaving life so little room.
We have become misguided...by darkness and pain,
Our's lives have become single sided.
We have become trapped in our own rain.
We sleep with the thoughts that dreams will carry us away,
Where freedom and love , in some kingdom lay...
But breath we breath, and eyes do wake,In the morning with the first sigh we take..
And the truth of our bitterness reveals...
Unholy truths and our dieing blood congeals.
We become cold and shadowy, with no way to be free...
And lost and in such sweet misery...
To this I say, my friend of old..
That together in life we can be bold, where truth and honor abound..
Together we have found solid ground...
And I say, Let the Darkness carry us away..
Let the Shadows of life's past consume..
For You have me and I have you.

 

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Very bold sentiment.. sad but with hope.. having someone in the end who shares pain and suffering of their own.. great flow and rhythm here.. embracing the darkness within each other.. truly nice sentiment.. hopefully bringing light in the new days!!! Thank you so much for sharing.. a very deep friendship!