Aurora

A simple response to my dearest friend's poem polished a bit...

Threshold where soul meets boundless soul,

Touch beyond softest flesh beats a steady beat,

Connective tissues holding no substantial form,

When words hold more meaning than most all.

Hold fast to this adore you so have close,

Weep not when distant whispers speak,

For shadows only show there is a light,

Where the tunnel ends and life so begins.

This intrepid dance of moonlit jubilation,

Testing of the waters you long  to bath in,

Keeping timeless wonder vastly unbound,

Raising more than smiles over the horizon.

 

Author's Note

Source of my inspiration is here:

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/ARamey/1388043/

Reviews

[Joe_VILOT_]

WOW!
the circle of lifers , reincarnation so it seems.
For shadows only show there is a light,
Where the tunnel ends and life so begins.


wonder why docs say "Don't Go into the light" in panicked tones

the end sounds like illysium or clarity of mind

This intrepid dance of moonlit jubilation,
Testing of the waters you long to bath in,
Keeping timeless wonder vastly unbound,
Raising more than smiles over the horizon.

something along those lines a final resting place
nice deeply meaning work I salute you knight of distilled wisdom O)

[Wynter Ignatius]

Thank you Joe - my inspiration comes in waves and I can but surf them and see where I end up.

[Joe_VILOT_]

Whats the biggest wave so far how far you went out in the water .
Distilled indeed.

[Joe_VILOT_]

Whats the biggest wave so far and how far you have into the surf? yeah that sounds better. cool

[Wynter Ignatius]

Check out some of my other works when you have the time I can't say for sure what my biggest piece or most profound is because I am bias to my own work.

Also, I did a small collections of 112 poems as a gift to a dear friend and they are hers to do with as she pleases so they may never see the light of day but I didn't write them for praise or recognition but rather to show her a the light I see in in her and show that even she evokes inspiration in others.

[Joe_VILOT_]

wow deep yeah when are we gonna the treasure-lode common.
check them out tommorow when i have time also check mine out when you want some shazam
to "kick" the old thinker into gear. ok now i saw the actual number of pieces of work that is huge if im not seeing double she must bee a pretty big part of your life if so even if not big love bud. One Dude to another.

[Joe_VILOT_]

see the treasure lode

[Wynter Ignatius]

She is my best friend by far - no one gets me like she does.

[Joe_VILOT_]

people are like onions (shrek quote) they have many layers (Donkey interrupts)....NO not those cakes onions ... finish this tomorrow tired lost my train of thought. ciao

[Sami Khalil]

"Where the tunnel ends and life so begins.

This intrepid dance of moonlit jubilation,"

Masterful and insightful. Excellent...:)...................

[Wynter Ignatius]

I had beautiful source material to work with so I can't take all the credit for this work but thank you none the less.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome....:).....