Two Stories

Every Story has another side. If there's going to be an out, there has to be an inside.

you love me,

You Hate Me.

you try to make me wild,

You Want To Sedate Me.

you tell me you love me,

Your Eyes Tell Another Story.

your arms try to comfort me,

Your Actions Make Me Worry.

you stay by my side,

You Want to Walk away.

you're willing to kiss me,

You're Ready To End Today.

you love me just enough,

You Never Ask For More,

you say you'll never leave me

,I See You Staring At The Door.

you never say you don't love me,

You Never Say You Do.

you tell me that you want me,

You Don't Really Want To.

you can't fly away,

Leave Me Here Alone,

you never tell a lie,

You Just Want To Go Home.

Reviews

[revenant21]

Wow, I really did like it. I might actually read more of your poems. It was good

Keep it going.

[Wondering Mind]

An interesting and genuine approach; the pace of contrasting thoughts was like a "ping-pong" game

[Destinee]

This is really great! very original and amazingly written. i keep trying to figure out which part was my favorite but i can't! I loved it all. Awesome!

[Sseoni]

What an amazing poem! I loved it! I've never read anything quite like this before! Absolutely wonderful poem! Telling both sides of a story! :D