Celui Que Je Déteste

"The One I Hate" short and gay but to the point. Once again childish but it provides some closure ^.^

Pourquoi est-ce que je devrais vous aider à gagner un autre coeur quand vous avez volé le mien?

Broken in spirit,

Tortured in mind,

I've fucked up your life,

you've fucked up my mine. 

Forever in secret,

I loved you without doubt,

Now as I speak to you,

I feel that fire burning out.

You've frozen my heart

With your velvet touch,

Did I ever think it possible,

to hate myself so much?

I've fallen for this deceit,

I've listened to your lies,

Thank god I can't see your face,

or else I'd be lost within your eyes.

Watching her steal your heart,

When mine is long since gone,

I'm slipping over the edge tonight,

God knows I'm barely hanging on.

I'll lie and say "I'm happy!

I know things will work out fine!"

When I really I can't take this s**t,

I'm falling hard across the line.

Helping you helping her,

Will this forever be my fate?

To help the one I truly love,

to win the one I hate?

Pour Amour vous aimez c'est Illegal…but je n'ai jamais été un pour suivre la loi.

Reviews

[Lyzzy Redd]

Definitely not gay or childish. This is cold, raw emotion. It's direct and to the point, and it flows really nicely. :)

[revenant21]

Twasn't gay or childish at all, in my opinion. In fact, I quite enjoyed it, Tori :P Wonderful job as usual!! Is this fictitious or is there something going on?? D: lol