Imagination

Spinning around help me,

Which way is up which way is down.

I can't see,

Am I alone is anyone around?

Where is the ground?

I'm in my mind,

I never knew what I would find.

Guess you never know,

Until you rise and go.

Reviews

[janwantstobfree]

Your peoms are so great you know the right words to say and it's something that is rare. keep it up

[ScoobyDooby]

again, another short and simple, but lovely poem. it reminds me of my poem, staggering. But i think i like this piece more c: I really do like this, great job!