pleasure of love/pain of denial

this is about a guy who cheated on me

him who made me laugh,

 him who made me smile,

him who played me hard ,

him who put me in denial,

he took my heart ,

tossed up my life,

he made me sad ,

spoke through a knife,

my guilty pleasure,

was his love,

my guilty pleasure ,

sent me above,

he was the castle,

to my throne,

he was the shiver, 

sent through my bone,

he was the dream, 

in my mind,

he was the sun,

that made me blind,

he threw my heart ,

into a box ,

set it down,

beneath some rocks,

my heart was shattered,

split in two,

my mind was shocked ,

because of you,

you are the fire ,

to my hate,

beg and pleed ,

but its to late,

you are the demon, 

in my hell,

dont crawl back,

because you fell,

your done to me ,

done in my mind,

a new dream,

i must find,

Reviews

[kingblaq]

Easy, smooth and natural flow with lots of raw emotion/passion and dream...I loved it
WRITE ON!

[Chellie]

I love the way this flowed. It was very easy to read but it was full of such raw emotion at the same time. I felt so much pain and sadness for her. It made my heart ache for her and I found myself wanting to console her. You have a lot of talent. I look forward to reading more of your work.

--Chellie--