Lost

A poem I wrote after I had a fight. Not the greatest but despair and misery are my muses.

I am lost,

In the recesses of my mind,

Where I once went to hide,

From the hatred and the sadness,

Is now filled with a sea of my tears.

I am like the curious, little Alice.

Lost, alone and confused,

In a sea of my own sorrow and fear.

Who has no one to hold me tightly,

Pet my hair and whisper

'Everything will be alright my sweet.'

I am lost.

In pain and misery

Wondering if I am wrong.

Or am I right?

I thought I knew...

But maybe I never did.

I feel a hole.

Way down, within my very core.

It's big and deep

It feels painful, very painful

I feel hollow.

Why do I have to feel so...

Alone?

Reviews

[M.E.Lyle]

Very well constructed and easy to read. I guess that means it has a good flow to it.
Being in the darkness you feel abandoned and unwanted. No one seems to care. It's an awful place to find yourself.

[Chris]

Discovering how to live with our self is perhaps the hardest part of beginning to be who we are. Some don't succeed, and too many others haven't a clue of where to begin. I liked the thought flow and the sense to your words.

I saw you spoke of being a video gamer - Diablo 2 and 3, and Starcraft 1 and 2 are great graphics and good storylines. Neither is a subscription game so the cost is minimal and one time.

[Sara]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :D

And Diablo 3 is amazing, I just haven't had a lot of time to play it. Definitely one of my favorite go to RPGs though :)

[Chris]

The Reaper of Soul Expansion is a must. It added a whole new dimension to the game via the added act and the new chars as well as the interactions with the NPCs and the characters' hired mercs and added quests/bounties.

Anyway good gaming and maybe I'll catch you on - in passing.

take care.