Love a Girl who Sings

Date a girl who sings,
Who can give you a halo and wings,
Take you on a cruise
Without suffering a bruise

Give her a song as a gift,
And in turn, happiness is swift
Quicker even; on a star
Serenading her with your guitar

She may be gentle up or down
Not wanting both of you to frown
So sweet, simple, mellow and tender
I bet you'll give in and surrender

Just love a girl who'll accept a duet
And lastly before I forget
Love a girl who can carry a tune
For it's just like sitting on the moon

Reviews

[Kho-San]

Nice poem, really like, strikes a chord in every man or women who wants love.
I thought it was good overall, but the rhymes didn't all look natural (I think this is a mistake I make too...but I can't tell) my advise is if you can't find a rhyme that will fit in...don't rhyme, put something else, poems aren't just about rhyming (even though I prefer ones that rhyme)
Good stuff, and sorry for the late comment ^^'

[Lily Mae]

I love this for so many reasons..it's beautiful and perfect..xx