Forever

*Read my poem "Love" first!!* Some one asked me for a reply to that poem and i caouldn't decide how to go about it. so i chose to do both positive and negative. This is the positive reply.

F

orever

 

Talking all the time

I never want to say Good-Bye

For up until this time with you

My live had been a lie

 

 

If none of this is real

That alright by me

This feeling deep within my heart

It’s real enough, and free

 

 

You know I’ll always be here

Because our love will never die

For every time your near me

My heart is light enough to fly

 

 

Ignore what they say

We belong together

Time has no place here

I'll love you forever

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[JRB]

keep up your work,
JAN/uisiom

[Xillie]

Wow. thats odd. lol. I thought my negative responce was better. ("Hurt"). but maybe thats just because of my personality and veiw on Love... oh well. thanx.

[Lindsey:)]

I can relate to this.
Wich is why i loved it!
Good Job:)